7 days later

https://www.webnovel.com/book/14376214406229405/The-Soldier-Turned-Hero
Colonel Shepherd was in the midst of a mission while He was covering the retreat of his comrades that's when he was hit by a stray bullet and died or He should have but he awakened in another world and the first sentence that he heard was "All Hail The Hero"!!
This is the story of a Soldier Turned Hero!
Witing for the first time neeed some help with feed back :)!!!

10 days later

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https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14489191105521705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4302671684 Romance Contest entry..

Eri a bullied girl at school, starts to be friends with an famous idol Yet since she doesn't care for such things like fangirling people she didn't even know that he was an Idol, what is she gonna do when she finds out he is an idol?!

I return the favour!

      MedusaDiva guten tag...!
      Hi, I just discovered that you're from Germany. By the way, hope you don't take my comments on your novel too heart. Download grammarly for your iOs, android or laptop. It would help you out much in your building of words.

      Good try... Keep it up.

      God bless

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          Name: The Daring CEO(TDC)
          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13837854906629005/The-Daring-CEO
          Synopsis: "Why are you always pampering your wife?" his friend asked.

          "Happy wife, happy life." the man said.

          Disclaimer - This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

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