Xenovraise Done! A good start in terms of world and character development! There were a few dialogue structure issues I found, which I recommended a solution if you want to follow it. It's a bit long, but if its useful don't hesitate to use it! I have a decent number of chapters so far for mine so if you're reading it for the swap no need to rush!

      Wayward_Scholar Good! Thanks for having the time. I wrote it out of whim so I think that's why I haven't had the time to rephrase every error in there. But thanks for pointing it out though. :) I'll also take time reviewing yours.

          Xenovraise
          Hey, I took a look at your chapter. I like how dynamic the dialogue is. I think you're off to a great start. Just have to go back and fix some punctuation and tense mistakes.

          One thing - what is the point of him not remembering his name when the reader knows the whole time? I think it's better if you make him only remember his name, since you refer to it so much.

              LiLhyz alright then. lets swap. please be kind to my book don't be too harsh on it.

                  A review with my story will be really appreciated. I really need to know what other ppl think about it. Thank you.

                  Sustaining the King's Life
                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/14781766305602705/Sustaining-the-King's-Life
                  Synopsis:
                  Faustina Heilen is a Witch's apprentice, possessing a 'special blood' which is desired by Slave Traders. She presided in the mountains to escape from slavery while practicing medicine with her master, Eula. This has been her 'normal life' with her sixteen years of existence.

                  Until one night, in Eula's death bed, a man named Jonathan came and forcefully 'collected' Eula's body to use necromancy in order to resurrect her from the dead. At the same time, a man who is least likely to be in Faustina's home came to propose a completely different deal.

                  A summon to the castle from the king, Alexander Octavius Ein Feuerkrieger IX, himself. A battle they must win before anything else. A battle in order to get Eula back from Jonathan.

                  A contract to lengthen the young king's life.

                    Hey there Xenovraise
                    This is my new story book SILENCE : says it all
                    Link:
                    https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/15195572205365605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306606724

                    Synopsis:
                    After being framed and raped FIZA YAQUB, daughter of a famous lawyer WAZIB YAQUB came back from jail and was facing a new world. Now, she is slut slept with 3 men.
                    She was fighting with her menal illness, with her dark future when one day, she saw one of her rapists has been murdered.

                    Hope you will like it.

                        HI!!!!!!!
                        I would like to recommend my novel, I'm an amatuer writer but still give it a chance it contains fantasy, romance, action and involves reverse harem.
                        The Fallen and The Realm of Beasts
                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/15089675606851205
                        谢谢
                        ありがとうございました
                        Thank you!!

                          Knock Knock
                          Hello, are you there?😉
                          I'm promoting my newly written novel. A light-hearted, cliche CEO novel (😏). The cold, handsome, rich guy meeting an ordinary woman (😏). And another cliche of being reborn (😏).
                          However, this is one of my babies. I have fun writing each chapter. So, you're much welcome to share the fun with me.

                          Title: Miss [Extra]ordinary: I was reborn to love you!
                          Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/15492766906747505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4300946076

                            'Binary Progression'
                            The story takes place in an almost abandoned MMO where the leftover fractions fight for control over the server.
                            Roleplayers, Cheaters, PVPers and more...
                            The story follows 3 players, A newcomer to MMOs - interested by the concept of a massive world, a roleplayer who has grown tired of constantly being in the top 10 and a cheater taking advantage of the lack of moderators on the server.

                            The story is primarily a comedy with RPG aspects and an MMO fantasy world.
                            (FYI - not an isekai, nothing against isekais - but I feel like I should specify :D )
                            https://www.webnovel.com/book/15514503506825505

                              HI!!!!!!!
                              I would like to recommend my novel, I'm an amatuer writer but still give it a chance it contains fantasy, romance, action and involves reverse harem.
                              The Fallen and The Realm of Beasts
                              https://www.webnovel.com/book/15089675606851205
                              谢谢
                              ありがとうございました
                              Thank you!!

                                Title: Son of the Spirit Beast
                                Genre: Fantasy - Xianxia - Action - Romance
                                Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13824940705480805/Son-of-the-Spirit-Beast

                                Synopsis
                                Rainbow Island, one of the several islands in this world governed by martial artists, is the stage of an incredible event. A newborn infant, Hei, is saved from a tragic ending and raised by a spirit beast spider.

                                Under these special circumstances, Hei ends growing up with the body of a human but the mind of a spirit beast. However, this world is filled with conflicts and his vision about spirit beast differs by the rest of the world.

                                So, in order to protect his family, he decides to become a martial artist, beginning a journey that would bring him toward the peak of martial artist society while discovering the concealed story of the world.

                                Thanks for those will read my novel

                                  a month later

                                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/15766232106002405/Trust-in-Love

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                                  Title: TRUST IN LOVE
                                  By: CailinMatthews
                                  Genre: Contemporary Romance

                                  Synopsis:
                                  Alex Carter lives with her aunt and he has been attending Woodlands Academy for three years now.

                                  Wait. 'Her'? 'He'? What? Is this a grammar mistake?

                                  Well... to tell you the truth,

                                  Alex Carter is not just the only heiress to one of the biggest companies in the world but also she's pretending to be a guy at school much to her parents' dismay.

                                  Fortunately, this normal and somewhat boring new life leaves her off the hook from the school's notorious playboys, unecessary dramas and juicy scandals. It was going pretty smoothly.

                                  That is...

                                  Until on a Monday late afternoon when Logan Parker stops by Alex's house just in time for him to catch her with extensions in her hair, make-up on her face, heels on her feet and boobs in her dress.

                                  Things were about to change for sure. Despite all of Alex's precautions, someone slipped inside her walls and became part of her world. For better or for worse? That still remains to be unseen.

                                  Join in and be part of the biggest secret in this fiction world.

                                    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11779557605524605/Journey-Of-The-Bright-Immortal
                                    Title: Journey Of The Bright Immortal
                                    Genre: Eastern fantasy
                                    Tag(3): Cultivation, Male MC, Creation Of Own Skills
                                    Synopsis:

                                    Cultivation ruled everything in this world.
                                    Humans and other species could sense the Qi of Heaven and Earth and break the barriers of mortality. They molded their mortal bodies through cultivation, gaining immense power and vitality.
                                    All to reach the realm of immortals.
                                    Billions strived from an early age to reach the Heavens and yet only a small part could cultivate. Cultivators, true gods among men and symbols of power and prestige, often treated common mortals as livestock or servants. As time passed and society adapted, a group of supreme beings enforced honor and justice. Cultivators no longer trampled mortals with ease, but they didn't always respect the rules. Absolute strength tore rules apart without effort, and clans and sects stood at the peak of power.
                                    With many worlds, countless territories, and beings, humans were often mistaken as the weakest species. Traveling between worlds was difficult, but the realms contained mysterious ways and arts.
                                    Ming Ren was born in the Bright Clan but deemed an untalented cultivator. However, his curiosity was unsurpassed under the heavens! Determined to uncover the path to the True Heavenly Dao and armed with an indomitable spirit and powerful companions, will he be able to surpass the gods and protect everything he cares about?

                                      Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/15659395006670205
                                      Title: Mechanical Mage
                                      Genre: Fantasy
                                      Tag(3): Magic, Adventure, Intelligent MC
                                      Synopsis:

                                      What happens when an engineer from Earth learned magic on another world?

                                      A Mechanical Mage!

                                      Elvin found himself reincarnated to a human body on another world when he was trying to save a beggar from thugs.

                                      That began his journey to the land of Ashenborn as Levi and make things that the people of the land has never seen.

                                      Steam engine? Guns? Artillery? Cars? Planes?

                                      Eventually, he will be cursed by somebody who he was destined to kill. His body will disappear part by part and it will only stop if he can find and kill the one who put the curse before his whole body totally disappear.

                                      Can Levi kill him?

                                      Or...

                                      Would he be still intact before he can kill the one who put the curse?

                                        4 days later

                                        WPC #97 Entry Sci-fi Romance
                                        Title: Lady of the Future

                                        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15949201905496805/The-Lady-of-the-Future

                                        Overview:
                                        Basically the MC was a system who became a human (the technical term in the novel was Irah). Her memories got deleted and system powers were gone. Though due to 'Unfeeling' a genius could just remain emotionless.

                                        Then after, she would meet her 'One' a mortal man (novel technical term for another kind of human). [Romance Part]

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