https://www.webnovel.com/book/15616245205221105/41919586072842656

This is the beginning of my second book. So far only the 3k+ word prologue has been released. I am hoping to receive feedback before I release more, but I may only wait a few additional days at most. So there shouldn't be that much of a delay. Any and all criticisms or critiques are welcome.

My first book, Fae Ambition, is available on Amazon and Kindle Unlimited if anyone is interested. But I plan on putting it up on Webnovel in its entirety next month. So for those of you who do not subscribe to KU and would like to read it for free, will only have to wait a few weeks. I am much more interested in what people think of my writing, than I am in earning a few dollars. Again, any and all criticisms or critiques on it would also be greatly appreciated.

Thanks

    Kamlyn it's not mine, but it'd be nice if you could support and review it. So that the translator has the motivation to translate that copyrighted novel, it's called. TEMPERED IMMORTAL

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        That's my new novel!!
        "Throne of World"

        System + World Building + Military + Romance.
        You'll get anything you want!! Try it.

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          http://bit.ly/2MDScUo

          That's my new novel!!
          "Throne of World"

          System + World Building + Military + Romance.
          You'll get anything you want!! Try it.

          Please vote and rate it!!

            ONCE IN A BLUE MOON....READ IT GUYS HOPE YOU LIKE IT....

              Hi There!

              I'd like to shamelessly plug my webnovel:
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              Title: The Chronicles of Atum the Annihilator
              Status: Ongoing
              Genre: Fantasy / Magic Fiction
              Synopsis:
              Enslaved and forced into gladiatorial magic combat, Atum must fight his way through demonic beasts and hideous monsters, warmages of every race and type, Imperial soldiers, corrupt politicians, ambitious royalty, and diabolical dictators, in order to ultimately gain his freedom.

              Follow along as Atum tries to survive long enough to analyze and break down every hard magic system he encounters in the space-faring magic-based Imperium, in a quest to break his own magical bonds and finally return home.

              That is, if he can remember who he really is, and where "home" is exactly.

              Thanks very much!

                HOW TO EARN MONEY NOW.../ I HAVE WRITTEN THE STORY,...

                  Kamlyn review mine and I'll review yours. Don't need to read it, just post 5 stars and say it's good

                      Kamlyn review mine and I'll review yours. Don't need to read it, just post 5 stars and say it's good

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