Hello there. If anyone sees this post, I would appreciate you to review my novel. It is a 100% original story, which is hard to come by these days. It's about a homeless man who became the greatest anchovy cook in the world! I would like to call this story a masterpiece. Please read it if you don't mind and have the time. Thank you. I will be sure to review OP's story.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/15751865806959805/Benjamin-Fenderson%2C-the-Man-who-Was

    review my works and novels...i am sure you love it!!!

      Littlepunnie

      Would you mind if I want to talk to you? If you've discord then #9449 is my tag number text me there, I've a few things to discuss regarding your novel <3

          kazesenken

          Hey man , I read your novel ,I added it to my library the style of your writing is exactly what I have been trying to adapt to my novel , I hope that if you read this you could read my novel and give some pointer in the reviews
          CIAO

              TOMB_DRONE
              I took a quick look. It's not that your English is that bad, the bigger problem is HOW you write. It's actually difficult to pinpoint where to start with the problems because the flow is messy and inconsistent. There's blocks of dialogue with hardly any world building to support it. Overall, it's very hard story to follow. I imagine that there are several details that are missing on paper that are in your mind as you try to imagine the scenes. Plus, the writing style keeps switching, from 1st person to 3rd person, to script-like to novel-like, grammar and punctuation all over the place.
              Basically, I get so distracted that I have no idea what the story is trying to tell me even after 6 chapters. The MC is doing stuff to get stronger, but he has a very blank character, so I have no idea what to make of him.

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