@lynerparel

I'm liking your novel so far (8 chaps in). I left a detailed review of what i thought of it so far. You have so many chapters at the time of this review. I'm proud of u! im also writing a romance for the first time ever so ill aspire to do the same. Mine is mainly fantasy with a touch of romance taking place in a world of sleeping gods and demons. four reincarnators aim to build a civilzation to touch the starry sky .
feel free to check it out wheveer ur free

https://www.webnovel.com/book/tales-of-the-reincarnated-100-trillion-years-with-you-beyond-worlds_27623979300384705

    IvanelaSalove

    gave ur story a read! im 7 chapters in! at the time of this review though you have like 70+ chaps which is very impressive! i'm liking the premise so far. gave your book a collection is read after my work 😄 . btw, i love ur pfp 2! im also a big naruto fan. also left a review for u too so feel free to check it out. the only unsatisfied point about ur novel is that its in first person. it's usually difficult to capture thr thoughts and perspective of other charcters but im seeing you do well so far! keep it up! ill aspire to do the same. my story's genre is similar to urs! please feel free to check it out: https://www.webnovel.com/book/tales-of-the-reincarnated-100-trillion-years-with-you-beyond-worlds_27623979300384705

        DBGB_Official
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          snippet_421
          Hi... In case you're interested in reading a Female Lead Fun Fantasy Adventure Story, please give the book of my friend a read.

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              The Savage Queen
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              A gorgeous silver-blue-greenish pair of eyes stared at the stars, with a male figure at their side eating a roast rabbit.

              A pair of eyes landed on the male’s sitting form when he teased, “You seem to appreciate the star, has the elf effect captured you?”

              “We’ve been going all across the land world, and now I have time to enjoy the nighttime.” In a classy and elegant manner, the female playfully said, “As charming as the elves and their kingdom are, they can’t capture a beauty like me.”

              The male dropped the leftovers of the roast rabbit and slowly crept to the female figure like a predator. His hungry purple eye shined in the darkness of the night, and his big, scaled horns were like his crown. As his fangs were exposed, he buried his head into her neck. He appeared as if he was going to bite into her neck, but he was instead forced to the ground on his back, where she sat on his lap, gently lowering her upper body to be very close to him so that there was no room between them.

              “I bet you love this position Vidarr.”, the female playfully remarked as she then ran her tongue along his lower lip and gave him a seductive grin.

              Vidarr’s hands firmly held her waist as she began to delicately brush her fingertips against his bare chest, and she kissed his lips, neck, and chest before rising to sit firmly on his lap and triggering a groan from him. He tightened his grip on her as she began to mischievously move up and down on his lap. In response to his sigh of enjoyment, the woman tilted her head toward the moon, her eyes turned blood red as her fangs emerged, plunged down, and bit into his neck, prompting both of them to let out moans but were cut short by an owl with a note on its foot.

              Karma gets up from Vidarr, his blood on her lip, and examines the note for the owl.

                4 days later
                7 days later

                Hi i ma working on a novel called The Fate of Alistor(TFOA) please go check it out.

                  20SKadir
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                      Novel Title: Beyond the RIft
                      I would really appreciate any sort of feedback...
                      Synopsis: What if you were forced to enter a Rift that gave you superpowers but also turned you into a monster?

                      After a Calamity that took out a quarter of the Human population, Humanity stood back up, stronger than ever before, and conquered the source of the Calamity.
                      A few centuries later, in a world governed by Superpowers, Ragnar has lived an adventurous life. From loosing his parents at 7, to serving as an enslaved Assassin till he turned 18, not a single moment had gone by where Ragnar felt bored.
                      Now that he is 18, he escapes the fate of slavery, only to find out his path ahead had already been decided for him. He does not have the right to choose.

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