Gourmet_DAO If you're writing an English novel but your grasp of the language is poor THAN an editor is a MUST! It can drop a potential 4 or 5 star novel down to 1 to 2 stars just food for thought!

      Tomoyuki I wonder why you would say that! Somehow, for some odd reasons, I don't really think that you write as awfully as you claim to do.

          His writing is really good, its just the readers on this site aren't used to actual characters whom they can't live through, so they get butt-mad. Tomo is a god cliche-er, somehow turning something I've seen so many times before into a story thats interesting and fun.
          Uh, I mean... the story is bad.. and... why is main character so dumb?! hmm? fix now! make him like me, or else!

            Lilliny I see but yes, it truly hurts when readers fail to understand the characters the way, we, writers want them to do. It absolutely hurts. Not that I am saying they are obliged to but, it hurts when they don't.

            I remember, there was this story that I was writing. I have always had a thing for perfect or near-perfect characters so I ended up creating a man who my readers went crazy over and I had expected the same but somewhere in the process, they forgot that the story was more about the female protagonist than him. They overlooked her pain and one day, when he made probably his first mistake - she decided that they were over. Now you might judge her here and anybody who hasn't read it would do because unless one reads how their characters and situations have been, one can't understand her decision but when my readers, who have read the tale, didn't understand and approve her decision - gosh, it had made me feel so bad... so bad that I can't even put it in words.

                Tomoyuki are any of your stories on WN? I'd love to read them... Lol if you don't mind that is

                    Lilliny wow you read 52 chapters! I'm truly impressed. I know it wasn't for me, but anyway Thank You, I feel a little vendicated. At least someone else saw what I saw.

                        The synopsis sounds really interesting, I'll check it out 👍

                          OJROMANCE Of course I did. I was trying to help explain to other people why you wrote the story the way you did. I'm beginning to regret it now, given how you're turning on me and talking to me in such a condescending tone.

                            Lilliny what hatred makes you do and still yet, I (the proud author) have super fans who even gifts my book crown. Please guys, keep the comments coming so that people who hate it will hate it more and those who love it, will read it in the process😅

                                OJROMANCE Why would you presume that I don't read romance? I just read nicely written romance and romance, for me, has got a lot more to do with emotional intimacy than just physical.

                                Besides, I have written a constructive criticism for you, which obviously didn't seem to have got your attention. I am upset with myself for taking out time to read and write that for you but thank you, I need to remind myself time and again where to invest my time and where not to.

                                    Yeah, your arrogance is really displaying itself very clearly for all to see.

                                    I've always maintained that people will like different things, and I'm sure you'll have fans who love your story and are willing to donate it. Nothing wrong with that. If you enjoy writing your story, please continue and don't let any criticism discourage you.

                                    However, I would advise you to be a little more humble.

                                    Also, I don't know how some of your readers will respond when they see you posting this:

                                    OJROMANCE I have readers who gifts my book and I'm not begging for gifts.

                                    In case you don't know, non bought coins with real money ain't giving me nothing.

                                    Perhaps you never intended for it to mean that way, but you're basically complaining about your readers who gave you non-monetary gifts as giving you nothing. Way to appreciate your readers and scorn their support, eh?

                                        Tomoyuki I'm fucking trending!!!
                                        Some people are really funny, is it not my writing?

                                        Ariana Grande even sang : I like it, I get it ..if you don't like it, then don't get it. But seriously, keep the comment coming ..uh😂

                                        And to those who think I'm gonna apologize ..😂😅😂

                                            OJROMANCE Good for you, I guess?

                                            No one is expecting an apology. No one is denying that your story is popular. There will be people who like your story, and people who hate your story. But there is no need for you to be rude, arrogant and condescending, is there?

                                                OJROMANCE Arrogance doesn't help in the long run. I am sure you know that. I sincerely hope that you never have to regret your tone, words and especially the talent of insulting and mocking others. Keep it up.

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