The_Canary oh also can you review my story titled 'sceptix: the legend of magic?' Sorry for the request but i need some advises. The link is in the top post.

    luciel_707 I wrote you an honest review. I liked the novel as a whole, although there are some incomprehensible moments in it. Rating 4 stars.

      luciel_707 I wrote you an honest review. I liked the novel as a whole, although there are some incomprehensible moments in it. Rating 4 stars.

        Need really a honest review.( call me a desperate but imma confuse rn.) Idm if its few but at least i want the other review swaps peeps are thruthful. Even you write a bad review in my story i accept it and give me a advice to improve it. I dont want a situation like ' i give you a 5 rate star so do the same' .-. What a wolf in sheep's clothing, we'll be honest to each others review thats it no more. Acccept the reviews and dont delete it even its a harsh or bad cause that will be the lesson in improving our novels that we create. Or do you want the other new readers to be fooled by the positive reviews in the story that are not really true but only a trading review + liar? Imma a sound a bit harsh but this is reality for the authors. Its not easy to become one but we tried for the sake of out purposes, we take risk especially our heart and mind if a peep saw a negative review she or he will be depressed and 50/50 chance to write or not again. But we can't lose hope here. They saying that because they have only one meaning 'improve more'. Keep improving until you walking to the bridge of success with the ones who supports you, and i know its a long journey but giving up is not the answer. If you did that then its already game over, life is not easy as a game right?🤣🤗😆

          luciel_707 Oooh, life is much more complicated, more difficult, full of trials and hardships of the way. But they pass, then relief comes, then do not forget to feed those in need with delicious food.

          And even a 2 or 3 star review, if it is written honestly, without insults, but shows ways to improve a more useful review than 5 stars.

          A friend will tell the bitter truth, the enemy is a sweet lie.

          Swap reviews are also needed to advertise new novels, but honest reviews allow them to grow, develop, but only on condition that the author himself wants to go this difficult path.

          We had an English teacher, a student volunteer from Texas, Miss Kew, and so she told us at the university that what the Americans say is your choice and you are not the victim of your choice. You can do everything if you make an effort, you will have motivation for this!

          She is partially right. Provided that you do not need to survive, and you can just live. But this is an annoying particular.

          In general, I’m not a writer, I don’t know much, but I am slowly learning, I’m learning new things, trying to apply this in my novels and reviews.

          As Comrade Lao Tzu - The Road of Thousand Lee, said, begins with one step.

          You & me can try and try to improve our novels

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