I can give yours a look through and see if I can offer some suggestions. I try my best to give a honest opinion and constructive criticism, even when it's not of a genre I like. You can take a look at my past reviews and see if that's what you are looking for.
In return, you can give mine a try. I don't necessarily need a review, but it would be good if you can leave some chapter comments to let me know your opinion.
luciel_707 done! :)
Gourmet_DAO thanks for your concern! 
I'll take care of it since I don't want to in blurry sight state.
Gourmet_DAO we can do this, we have to or no story ending for the characters. It will be sad tho. Sometimes I'm so weird in myself to the point that i feel my characters are looking forward too in my work for their story lol
they are one of my inspirations too. Even they're not real. What a tragic reality.
kazesenken sure I'll review yours! And thanks :)
ILLYAchan thank you for the wonderful review and advice! I'll review your story back
luciel_707 As the Taoists said, look inward, look around, and you will know the path of enlightenment. Choose your path Tao! So do it, author, while you have time, you are healthy, write, the completed story in 200 chapters warms your soul nicely. You know that you could finish one story to start a new one, maybe your heroes will live on.
Like mine, the past (the Tan era) is the present (21st century) - the future (21st century middle). All heroes meet each other. But while the past is only 19 chapters (I have a creative crisis) - the future (the same in search) - while I write about the present)))
luciel_707 As the Taoists said, look inward, look around, and you will know the path of enlightenment. Choose your path Tao! So do it, author, while you have time, you are healthy, write, the completed story in 200 chapters warms your soul nicely. You know that you could finish one story to start a new one, maybe your heroes will live on.
Like mine, the past (the Tan era) is the present (21st century) - the future (21st century middle). All heroes meet each other. But while the past is only 19 chapters (I have a creative crisis) - the future (the same in search) - while I write about the present)))
ShinSungmi sure I'll review it soon. My novel link is on the top of the comments, the very first one or just search 'sceptix: the legend of magic' thankies!
Posting link for reviews -- Up for review swap~
Perverted Mage
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15471288606658105/Perverted-Mage
Synopsis:
"What the F**k!"
When Nessie woke up, those were the words she spat out when she found herself in the bed with another girl.
What? Isn't she a woman? How did she get that thing between her legs?
Why does her chest feel so light? Where did her two balls go?
How did she become a man?
Hey, you! Stop, you perverted girl! Where are you touching?
Nessie Linus was a twenty-nine years old top pro-gamer who liked to play as a male character.
She had followers. She was rich. She had wives.
[Since you like to play women in the games, it's better if you die and reborn as a man.]
When she was found out, she was killed by one of her angry wives.
Does her story end? No!
Unfortunately, she's reborn in the body of an infamous perverted magician who is a teacher at a magical military academy in a world on the brink of war between humans and sorcerers.
Join the adventures of Nessie Linus and her students as she takes over the world with her students.
ShinSungmi sure will review it :)
kazesenken i already reviewed it ,your turn xD
Norah_Koch I'll review it soon sure a review swap.
ShinSungmi ok!
Title: Mystical Encounters
Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/13088054405635905
