ILLYAchan I'll read and leave a review
Need a review for my story and swap review if you like ^^/
The_Canary alright! Added yours to the library
luciel_707 alright added to the library
Norah_Koch thanks! I'll review your book soon
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ILLYAchan already reviewed
ShinSungmi done posting :)
ShinSungmi already reviewed, your turn
Norah_Koch already reviewed the perverted mage.
Norah_Koch it seems I can't add to my library. Don't know why. Even I click the link but it says error. I can't review this story, I apologize.
Norah_Koch I'll test it again
ShinSungmi done! :)
I'll take a look this weekend. Out of town for Thanksgiving now.
Btw, I'm confused by your comment. The female lead introduces herself in the first few paragraphs, but you somehow missed it?
luciel_707 ok <3
kazesenken sorry my mistake, ill change my review.
kazesenken sorry my mistake, ill change my review.
luciel_707
I gave yours a review. To be honest, it needs a lot of work to polish it. The story is good, but there are a lot of basic writing problems. Not just the grammar and spelling, but how the story comes together. I personally had issues 'imagining in my mind' how your story plays out due to missing details.
luciel_707 It's done. Hope you won't get mad and delete it.
Sighgray
I didn't exactly sugarcoat it. My review was pretty much the same as yours but less blunt, lol.
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Posting novel/Self-promotion
Review Swaps? Just let me know and I'll get it done.
Novel: The Goblin Nation
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15079306606810405/The-Goblin-Nation
Synopsis: They should have fought back. They felt his disdain, but no one wanted to believed - believe that they were never loved. That they can just appease him again. Sacrifice their lives again. Conquered their enemies again. Built wonders for his majesty again. And when they finally accepted the truth, it brought them to their knees as his machines burned down their wonders and reduced them back into animals.
But there was still hope. The Stellars told of our survival. Our downfall was just the beginning. Our regression into animals was merely a delay. At the time, our people were split into different tribes. Before the doors to the infinite sea are open. There will be a child born to stand against his machines, born to challenge his majesty. And with a sword in one hand and a scepter on the other, that child - that hero, will lead his kingdom. The kingdom of goblins.
Sun, the goblin child born to save all of goblin kind. A former human from an unknown world died and reborn with little memory of his past. Join him as he takes on the world, make new friends, uncover the secret of his past, and lead the goblin kind from the darkness.