Remember, it can be good or bad, I just need to be honest, I just need something that makes me see my writing level.
Someone to review my book?
Loser666 It's the first story I make, so if you can give the most honest opinion I appreciate it. I need to know how this story is mine.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/15528240206873505
Sinopse:
With a very peculiar name, James always wanted to have super powers and be immortal, and he did, or almost. With lucid dreams James can imagine being a Superman and flying through the skies. On a fateful day he finds a dubious book, at a dubious price, with a dubious description, after which his dreams have never been the same.
Loser666 With a very peculiar name, James always wanted to have super powers and be immortal, and he did, or almost. With lucid dreams James can imagine being a Superman and flying through the skies. On a fateful day he finds a dubious book, at a dubious price, with a dubious description, after which his dreams have never been the same.
Hi Marte, I can start with your synopsis.
What feelings do you want the reader to have when they read your summary? Who are you trying to attract as your reader?
Yes, a summary needs to sum up the premise of the book with few words. The message and intentions need to be clear. It needs to pitch and hook. In order to do that, you need to imagine the type of reader that'll be likely to jump to your story.
At the moment, I'm not sure what to feel of your story from your summary. So, I'll probably won't open to the chapter.
Hope that helps.
Hmm so many people looking for reviews
He's in this thread but not the other one...?