Updated:The day I met him

Aysel_Inara · Dec 9, 2019

MOCHIIICHII

Try reading an authentic top novel before you proceed. Because you need to learn a lot more yet.

MOCHIIICHII · Dec 9, 2019

Aysel_Inara ok

MOCHIIICHII · Dec 9, 2019

I need some improvement.

Aysel_Inara · Dec 9, 2019

MOCHIIICHII

You're another user or the one from previous account? XD

Aysel_Inara · Dec 9, 2019

MOCHIIICHII
Oh great! You changed your name. So I suggest you to do a few search regarding how to write a novel. Then read published novels to study the basic style not the novels here on WN.

Lilliny · Dec 9, 2019

I feel like I'm missing context somewhere here? Was something deleted?

Tomoyuki · Dec 9, 2019

Lilliny Yeah, Mochiiichii deleted her original post, which was simply, "they kissed." Because she was updating readers on what happened in her story.

Lilliny · Dec 9, 2019

Tomoyuki Oh...

Rak0 · Dec 10, 2019

They kissed..... Lewd

Lilliny · Dec 10, 2019

Now kith