Perizou I finished reviewing your book. I also made some remarks in the comments. I hope it helps.

    Nightingale367 ah I see and thanks for that I'll be sure to edit when I have time and I'll be reviewing your story as well once reading a big chunk of it.

      Anyone interested in a review swap?
      My novel, Love Game - The Quest to the Prince's Heart, is a Fantasy-Romance and I have 32 chapters posted so far.

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