https://www.webnovel.com/book/27616810208000105 Here's my novel, I am trying to make a different kind of Mc with a mind that helps him to achieve his goals. I am willing to review swap and give genuine tips for anyone willing to read through my novel.
CosmicPrime
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- Joined Nov 30, 2019
Well, I am up to read most fandoms, but just as long as it's in the style of what I described before. I barely have any interest in any other story since they all just feel samey or boring to me.
Hey, has anyone read this webnovel? Read The Dragon God Of Tyranny(Dxd) - God_of_wolves - Webnovel
If someone did read this one, then I am looking for an Highschool DXD fanfiction, or really any harem novel or fanfiction just like this one. I do not care about the technical quality of this novel or if others considered this one bad or boring. I genuinely love everything about this fanfiction, I love Malkueth, his domineering personality, his obsession with strength and how he doesn't take shit from anyone and doesn't have to be a subordinate to anyone.
The action is good, and I love how the harem isn't filled with bullshit melodrama or teasing that goes nowhere, if he likes a woman then he will get that woman, I really want a harem like this.
And for those who haven't read this fanfiction, basically I want an Mc like this one, where he wants power, does what he wants without any restriction and his overpower. I do not care about seeing a Mc trying to be a good person or blend into human society, I fend novels like these with a large focus on the mundane side so fucking boring. I hate novels where the Mc power growth is so slow and there's barely any advancement in the harem all because of jealously bullshit.
I just want any novel or fanfiction where the Mc gains power very quickly, doesn't take shit from anyone, can actually beat the powerful people in the story instead of struggling, and actually has a harem. A true harem as in the harem doesn't just get barely form after 100 chapters, I love early romance than barely any romance.
And it is a harem where the girls accepts that they are in a harem and there are regular interactions of them being in a harem. I like seeing sex scenes, but it's not a deal breaker if there is none.
Hey, I have another long one, and I would really appreciate it if anyone read all of it, but does anyone know of any series where there's actually harem romance? An actual Polygamy relationship?
And I do not want series that call themselves harems or have the tag on it, only for the relationships to either go absolutely nowhere, be ambiguous for thousands of chapters or are just tacked on at the end. And while I can admit melodrama can be good at times, I hate it when series that tries to do harem puts such a large focus on just jealousy bullshit or people denying their feelings because they can't simply talk to each other and work through their relationship.
Also, I would really like it if the MC were calm and determined type. A Mc that openly shows he wants an harem and is open to giving affection to all of his wives.
I hate perverts MC that can only act serious at times. Himkagashi classmate comes to mind as I don't really see or feel the love in that one. These kind of Mcs always have the troupe of having a heart of gold or some bullshit, but really, they're just too lame for me to care and most of the time rarely has genuine romantical development with their woman.Nor do I want the MCs that can barely handle one woman but is somehow given a harem just for melodrama bullshit. These are the kind like To-Love Ru or really, any generic Japanese anime or manage where the mc never openly states anything, never gets into any relationship, or if they do, it's at the end of the series where it's pretty much pointless.
And what I consider melodrama is the type where instead of people just talking it out with each other, you know actually taking their relationship forward, or one person being determined enough to do this.
Instead, it's a woman getting made at the mc, jealous at another woman, the Mc doesn't know what to do about it or some other person make the situation worse and nothing comes out of it. It's nearly always these types of situations when it concerns the harem genre since rarely would an author just write about just talking through their problems.
So, I don't want series like Dxd where even as the MC has genuine reason for not getting a relationship, I can't find anything to invest him as I dislike his base personality. This goes for many Japanese series where the harem is actually nothing where no relationship development or intriguing talk into getting into a relationship. And I hated the harem aspect Arfituea, I barely considered that novel a harem series at all. Especially when Hajime clearly just wanted to stay monogamous and yet, after numerous volumes, he began to accept other girl feelings. And at that point, I can barely care at all. Especially when he still mainly focuses on Yue, rather than giving all his women open affection.
Also, I hate the harem aspect in Trinity Seven, it's just the same no relationship development, but Mc who is openly a pervert. I don't find that cool or amazing at all when there's still no actual harem romance or getting into relationship. And I don't care enough to see if there some bullshit plot reasons why he can't have an actual harem.
Hated the harem in Sekirei because of the Mc, hated the 'harem' in roasariao vampire, hated the harem in to love ru, and I pretty much dislike all harem anime and most harem Mangas.
Also, I really don't want the generic xianxian answers to harem novels. I hate the romance in Against the Gods. I hate how much melodrama was in Martial Peak harem, too much damn thousand years cultivator women acting like mortals, and it gets tiresome. I hate the MC of long live the summon and Great Demon King has the same tiresome melodrama as Martial Peak. None of these novels really explore a Mc developing with his harem. When they get the girl, that's basically it besides for small scenes together.
I also hated Ancient Strengthening Technique. And I don't really like the harem romance in Grasping Evil at all. Despite it being a novel gear towards a harem, it's still full of all the annoying troupes of xiaxia romance. That being romance there rarely goes to the point, exploring a relationship beyond just getting together, jealous melodrama and women having to go to a higher plane because of stupid family bullshit.
On top of that, I hated when in these novels, instead of just having a female side character as purely an ally, like what Lin Ming does, no, for some reason these side characters need to have some kind romantical attachment that will never get develop at all.
I hated the harem in God Of Slaughter, hated the harem in very pure and ambiguous, both its prequal and its sequal, absolutely hated the harem in world-defiying dan god, hated the 'harem' in Martial God Asura, hated the harem in Heavenly Jewel Change, Zhanxian.
Chaotic Sword God just barely gets a pass, but it's so fucking bog down by every fucking female side character falling in love with Jian Chen for saving them. I wish they wouldn't waste time in this aspect. To me, I don't care if it's to show Jc character or something, I just find it worthless to include if nothing will come for it. They can just be friends and mean all the same. Only Ya Kie or whatever her name was made sense as she was just a tool for a grand prime supreme cultivator.
What I'm really looking forward is a harem like Martial World, Pure Love Insult Complex, 100 Girlfriends manga, Road to Kingdom, Kujibiki Tokushou Musou Hāremu ken, and even the Hello Neet manage.
Martial World does have the troupe of Lin Ming having little scene with his wives. But at the very least, Qin, Qianyu, Xiao Moxian and Sheng Mei all have their own developed arcs with Lin Ming. They actually have romantical development together and as it is common in cultivator society, there's no damn melodrama about having a harem as it is simply natural for someone like Lin Ming to have one. And there's no dumbass useless female side characters that just falls in love with Lin Ming for the smallest of reasons.
Pure Love Insult Complex is a more unique one, but at the very least, Yoshida is an interesting enough character where he actually develops his relationship and grows with them. It's true that many times he is forced to act because of Minhao and the others, but unlike others, he actually shows to genuinely care for his lovers in his own way. Even in the beginning of the story where he was at his weakest, he still adapts to all situations and rarely acts retarded. Also, the women in his harem actually discourage fighting among themselves, even Megumi, the one that has the most jealousy is usually talk down on for any attempt at discourse.
100 Girlfriend is another rare case where the harem can actually develop. Even though it is heavily focused on comedy and has alot of gags, the series still has many moments of Rentarou showing why he cares for his girlfriends, the interaction between him and the girls and they actually share emotional scenes and kisses that are not played for laughs at all.
Aegir in Road to Kingdom does indeed act perverted and is sex-driven, but at the same time, he's very courageous, insanely powerful and gives all women he's with an amazing time. There was only one time, to my knowledge, where he got so drunk to that point, but he was sorry and made her his wife. Aegir is another case where he actually has a lot of development and interaction with his women in his harem. And he also takes all the women has slept with into his manor later on in the story.
Personally, I think that Kujibiki Tokushou Musou Hāremu is that best for me when it comes to harem romance. An actually powerful and confident mc that shows zero hesitation in being affectionate with his wives. No tiresome melodrama, and all of his women actual get develop and good interactions with him. He's also the more entertaining kind of pervert in which he knows when and where to show his perverted side and can actually charm his woman.
And in the Hello Neet manga, I truly do like the way he met and developed with each of his women. And there was little melodrama, they all accepted to each other, got married early on and the story still developed from there. And it's really nice that there is a lot of development and interaction Masru has with his harem even after their marriage. It also helps that he grows stronger and more courageous.
These series are really what I'm looking for. I don't care if the series in question is considered bad or trash in the public eye, or if the Mc is considered immoral, evil or whatever. What I want is a Mc with true harem development, where all girls know of each other, can accept each other and develop their relationship even after getting into the harem. And like I said, I would really like it if the Mc were calm, determined, genuinely like his woman and isn't afraid to show affection and isn't confided to have to be this good person or having some kind monogamous value.
I'll take anything. Novel, Doujin, Fanfiction, Visual novel, manga, anime, western novel, xianxia, just as long as it fits what I want.
True Martial World just couldn't capture my interest as much as martial world. Er gen novels doesn't suite me and IET novels really lacks in proper battle scenes. Haven't tried warlock yet and douluo dalu and coiling dragon doesn't suite me.
Hey, I really need some help. Honestly, at this point, do anyone have any novel truly like Martial World?
And I don't mean something in a similar vein but is nothing alike martial world apart from it being in the same genre. Because I've come to realize that all of these cultivation novels are either too similar, with the trash background or cripple, or some revenge plotline, not my interest, or just boringly slow. I know some people may still say that Martial World is no different from others, but I read through this novel many times and the way martial world unfolds is truly seperate from others in the same genre.
What I want is a Ling Ming character. A truly determined character, with a serious and straight forward personality. Like he wants to pursue the martial dao, not strength. Many other Mcs of this genre either wants revenge, to protect their love ones, to become supreme or some other goal that needs direct power.
But Lin Ming only pursue the martial way, strength simply comes with it. As he said in the very first chapter, Lin Ming took a deep breath before speaking out in a slow yet powerful tone. “Zhu Yan, I am not your match in terms of talent, I am even less so in terms of family support. However, the cultivation of martial arts does not depend only on talent and financial support; there is an even more important factor… the heart of a martial artist!”
“Your cultivation of martial arts is done for the sake of wealth, status and vanity. However, my cultivation of martial arts is done for the sake of pursuing the Martial Way. The Martial Way does not exist for those with talent, it does not exist for those with authority and it does not exist for those with money. It exists for those whose heart beats for the sake of martial arts! There will come a day when I will surpass you!”
This is what I like. The martial way does not equal strength. The martial way is a purpose that Lin Ming wants from his soul. Even his childhood friend hardens him, instead of some boring romance as it said, Before Lan Yunyue had left him, Lin Ming had already made the decision to break through into the Pulse Condensing Stage and pursue an even higher realm of martial cultivation. The current Lin Ming was no different. If he still had any doubts before, then Lan Yunyue’s act of leaving him had hardened his resolve towards the Martial Way.
And also, these novels need to have a truly powerful mc with a great growth. I'm so fucking sick and tired of cultivation novel having mc being described as geniuses, and yet their combat prowess can barely skip one major realm. Their cultivation are so slow and combat prowess so small that causes them to always get chased by elders or higher figures. And or have an enemy that gets focused on for so many chapters which gets tiresome.
Lin Ming combat prowess went from skipping stages, to one major realm, to two major realms even in the god realms. Even as a Divine sea cultivator, he was stronger than Divine Lords. Even as a Divine Transformation, he was stronger than Holy Lands. He was greater than world kings as an divine lord. And even as an empyrean, he was stronger than so many true gods. His foes are rarely far beyond his level that'll take hundreds of chapters to ever reach. There's a consistent pace that Martial World has with its foe and truly display Lin Ming amazing prowess.
For example, in the first arc, there was no bullshit young masters Lin Ming had to deal with or annoying ass elders wanting to kill him. His enemies were Wang Yihago, Zang Cang, Zhu Yan, and Zhang. These were his only foes and nobody else tried to kill him, and it was very satisfying when he does beat them. Ouyang was introduced after his fight with Zhang, but Lin Ming went on a journey to have enough strength to kill him, not allowing that Ouyang to last hundreds of chapters.
Basically, I want an Mc with powers that can dominate like Lin Ming. And it shows the process of how Lin Ming works himself to death to be able to always win over his enemy. I honestly don't care that it's just wish fulfillment or a power fantasy. I absolute love that Lin Ming alone took on the entire Saint Race. Only he could push back the Saint before the war erupted. And complete dominate them, Astral Vault and Soaring Feather after the war started.
And please, for any novel suggest, can it be in a similar writing style as Martial World? The writing style in martial world is true satisfaction. Lin Ming is doubted, but he never bullshits with anyone. There's no tiresome melodrama romance, or jealously or any other bothersome elements. There is no boring as bantering, or an annoying large focus on side characters. And Lin Ming is an enjoyable character in this style as he completely focused in any situation. I just need something that capture martial world writing style, everything is spoken with a purpose without any bullshit.
As an example, I like short and sweet interactions like this,
“Lin Ming, I guess that you want to go alone, but… hehe, Master has specifically asked me to go together with you.” Behind Lin Ming, Mu Qianyu naughtily winked. Lin Ming’s strength was still far from being able to match someone at the Revolving Core realm. If he went alone, this world might be too dangerous for him.“Going with Senior-apprentice Sister Mu is also good.” Lin Ming smiled. Even if he gave all the lucky chances he found to Mu Qianyu, he wouldn’t care at all.
“Mm, let’s go. I don’t know where the Demon God Imperial Palace is, so let’s head towards the center of this world first.”
“Okay.”
The two of them flew forwards. < To the point without any bothersome fluff.
Also, I really want it to be a detailed martial cultivation society, where you know, martial cultivators wants to pursue the martial way. As in martial world, despite it being an classic xiania, there's rarely, if ever bullshit young masters. There is only great young geniuses competing against each other for their martial path.
As also stated by the novel, Those that walked the path of martial arts were doomed to face countless perils and dangers. An ordinary genius from a fourth-grade sect could challenge those with a higher cultivation than them, eventually they could become an extreme Xiantian Master.
This was the road that martial artists had to take. Although it couldn’t be said to be taking the entire world as an enemy, a martial artist would inevitably run into increasingly formidable adversaries. One had to step on their corpses to walk forwards, or otherwise be stepped on by them instead, dying and paving the road for them.
The Great Dao was like a vast moat; only the brave would find victory!
But how about higher? Could this ordinary genius ever compare to the mighty elders of the Realm of the Gods?
In the Sky Spill Continent alone, geniuses were as numerous as the clouds. But in this universe, there were many worlds that were just like Sky Spill Continent; the number of talents could not be estimated simply.
With so many talents, some were born into fourth-grade sects, fifth-grade sects, sixth-grade sects, or even Realm of the God’s sects or Holy Lands. They had unimaginable resources and materials to cultivate with. They were probably thrown into a miracle medicine jar after being born too. Growing up like this, they also had access to the best cultivation methods, and in the Holy Lands of the Realm of the Gods, the cultivation methods they studied weren’t any different to his own!
In addition to these geniuses that were born into unfathomable backgrounds, there were many talents that underwent all sorts of adventures and had experienced all kinds of fortuitous encounters. In the world they lived in, they were the main characters!
With so many people, how many had truly reached the peak of martial arts? <This is what I also love about martial world. A deadly society where it's both glorious and damning. It's a society that is very consistent and honestly fascinating to me to see. I rarely see other cultivation novels go into detail on just why they want to cultivate or what it means to be a martial artists.
But also, it doesn't have to be strictly a cultivation novel. As long as the novel fits what I want from above, I'll read it. It can even be a fanfiction, just as long as it fits what I want.
Also, by the way, just to clearly state this, I read realm in the firmament, Grasping Evil, Chaotic Sword God, Dragon-Marked War God, Invincible conquer, history number one senior brother, Sovereign of the Three Realms, Emperor Domination, Martial God Asura, Martial Peak, against the god, Reverend Insanity, world destroying devil emperor, nine evolution true spirit, legend of the great sage, Womanizing Mage, long live the summons, eight desolate sword god, extreme eternal demon, eternal master and other novels off mtl sites. Western novels does not interest me, read them and nothing capture my interest. There are some Japanese light novels I do like, but none of them capture the xianxia feels as these chinese web novels does. There's only really a handful of manga I liked, but they far differ from chinese novels. I already mentioned I read plenty of novels.
There is no other higher realms in martial world besides realm of god planes, or planes equal to the realm of the god. The asura road, soul god world and Demon God tomb are all just different universe that are at the very least on the same level as the realm of gods.
Girls do have the troupy beauty description other cn novels have. But Lin Ming only has allies that helps him. He rarely interacts with girls on a causal level compared to other novels that I read. Martial world is primary a cultivation novel, and Lin Ming literally barely has any friends besides the three from the holy demon continent. The only girls he had any longer interaction with was qin xunaguan, mu qianyu, yan little moon, mo eversnow, moxian, suya and sheng mei. And only Qin, Mu, moxian and sheng mei gets with Lin Ming and have romantic moments. None of the others have any. And all arcs stay focused on martial cultivation and the lives of martial artists.
And I can try warlock, though, IET novels similarly suits to my states. I'm just asking for novels with tastes to mines since I did try breaching out to others, but I simply like martial world styles of novels. I'm not asking for a good or bad novels, but a novel truly similar to martial world. That's what my suits my tastes the best.
I did read history number one founder and really liked it.
@Mel_Aniv I reviewed your story, good job on it.
Does anybody want to review swap? Here's my link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/harmonious-chaos-ghost-system_19855680406636005
Title: Harmonious Chaos Ghost System
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/harmonious-chaos-ghost-system_19855680406636005
Genre: Romance, Action, Adventure, Harem, System, Modern, Cultivation, Fantasy
Synopsis: Asher Vipond is an honest young man ready to have his whole life change forever. He was about to undergo an event that everyone across the entire world eagerly awaits for.
It was the event where one would awaken their System’s Soul Magical Power!
With this, Asher would be able to gain a powerful mystical ability, cultivate and refine Mana Energy to rise to the top of the food chain in a harsh unforgiving world.
All of Asher’s hopes and dreams were dependent on this one day and he couldn’t fail no matter what.
However, in a strange twist of fate, Asher ends awakening a power unknown to all. A power that can be also quite perverse at times.
And all it cost was….his humanity.
devilDestroyer want to review swap?
I'm down for any review swap. My novel is:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/yin-yang-pleasures-of-cultivation_17799115205965805Synopsis: Life wasn't the best for Darcel. Just because of what he was born with. He was robbed of a normal cultivation life by the hands of a strange and cruel Organization.
An Organization that treats human life as nothing more than little lab rats and Darcel got forced into their cruel experimentations.
For years he lived this way, only having a bit of protection because of his inborn powers. It wasn't until a recurring dream of his unexpectedly had a slight change to it.
Be it luck, fate, or destiny, Darcel didn't know and frankly didn't really care. Because after that dream, his life took another dramatic turn to venture out into the universe and explore the pleasure of Yin's Darkness...
SnowPenguin just reviewed your story good work
Avidfan And I just reviewed your story, nice work.Title: Yin Yang Pleasure of Cultivation
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/yin-yang-pleasures-of-cultivation_17799115205965805
Genre: Cultivation, Xianxia, Action, Adventure, Romance, Harem, Weak to Strong
Synopsis: Life wasn't the best for Darcel. Just because of what he was born with. He was robbed of a normal cultivation life by the hands of a strange and cruel Organization.
An Organization that treats human life as nothing more than little lab rats and Darcel got forced into their cruel experimentations.
For years he lived this way, only having a bit of protection because of his inborn powers. It wasn't until a recurring dream of his unexpectedly had a slight change to it.
Be it luck, fate, or destiny, Darcel didn't know and frankly didn't really care. Because after that dream, his life took another dramatic turn to venture out into the universe and explore the pleasure of Yin's Darkness...
Just ping me, I'm down for any reviews.
Title: Yin Yang Pleasure of Cultivation
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/yin-yang-pleasures-of-cultivation_17799115205965805
Genre: Cultivation, Xianxia, Action, Adventure, Romance, Harem, Weak to Strong
Synopsis: Life wasn't the best for Darcel. Just because of what he was born with. He was robbed of a normal cultivation life by the hands of a strange and cruel Organization.
An Organization that treats human life as nothing more than little lab rats and Darcel got forced into their cruel experimentations.
For years he lived this way, only having a bit of protection because of his inborn powers. It wasn't until a recurring dream of his unexpectedly had a slight change to it.
Be it luck, fate, or destiny, Darcel didn't know and frankly didn't really care. Because after that dream, his life took another dramatic turn to venture out into the universe and explore the pleasure of Yin's Darkness...
Title: Defying World Asura
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/17249439705045205
Genres: Fanfiction, Reincarnation, Action, Adventure, Romance, Xianxia
Synopsis: Desperation calls for desperate measures to take place. When a struggling pair cousin barely making ends meets wander into a haunted mansion for a quick buck they soon realize what a huge mistake it was. Alas, there was no cure for regret as they have forcefully reincarnated thanks to the will of a selfish God. But with no cheating wishes nor any information can two humans survive? Survive in the power dominating the world of Against The God, Martial God Asura, and Martial World all combined together? It seems like a recipe for another cruel end! But for these two low-class humans they experience a strange and different reality of the so-called cultivation world...
Other Info: This is a combined fanfic of Against The God Martial God Asura and Martial World. I'm trying a new take on this genre.Title: Defying World Asura
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/17249439705045205
Genres: Fanfiction, Reincarnation, Action, Adventure, Romance, Xianxia
Synopsis: Desperation calls for desperate measures to take place. When a struggling pair cousin barely making ends meets wander into a haunted mansion for a quick buck they soon realize what a huge mistake it was. Alas, there was no cure for regret as they have forcefully reincarnated thanks to the will of a selfish God. But with no cheating wishes nor any information of the specific combined universe created for them how can two low-class humans bare against a new strange reality of the cultivation world.
Other Info: This is an combined fanfic of Against The God Martial God Asura and Martial WorldThePotatoKing hey I just reviewed your story, keep up the good work. And if you still want to review mines it's
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15509381605699705@Dan_Ryder I've reviewed your novel, good job on it.
I'm up to review anyone novels, and here mines if anyone wants to review it as well.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15509381605699705RenuKakkar sure let's do it my book is:
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