Fai_A Sorry for replying late(I wasn't online for a while). (✿◡‿◡) Sure, I'll gladly review your novel. Thanks for the swap!

    Hello, could anyone offer some opinions over my story?

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/16759993005135805

    It's my attempt at making an isekai. (Sorry for being cliche)

    It's about two kids.
    One is a servant boy who is trapped and forced to fight for all eternity until someone can free him from his contract while the other is a lost girl trying to find her way home while surviving in this world.

    People would comment on every chapter but one day i pressed the "completed" button by accident and suddenly everything went silent.
    I also don't mind doing review swaps but i tend to give harsh criticisms though.

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