Mrs_Taxi Nope if you read it, I'll take your word. I just finished yours very good, I'll keep reading as it seems to be getting quite good now!
Good work

mrmrcia same here, I will only have a review up tonight, but I will post comments as I read through

mrmrcia I do have to go to the gym, but the first 2 chapters are fantastic! Good effort and writing! I look forward to seeing how this barron ends up

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I've already added it to my library.
I will start to read now.

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