itsmeTuba Thanks a lot for a wonderful and honest review, lol #gotroasted. Well I will try to give an honest review as well. Thanks. :)

YIANUWANGXIAO I hope you don't take my review too negatively. It's not meant to be rude, it's meant to be constructive feedback. I'm honestly telling you of how I felt reading your novel.
Since you update often and have two novels going on, I imagine you are very interested in being a writer. I don't want you to overestimate yourself and later get shot down. Since you're starting out like this, its a good time to fix the issues rather than forcing your way through.

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