Lullabybao I have read a part of your novel and am currently reviewing. What i'll say her his it was rather amazing and good job.

pelzy I already added your book to my library, so I'll review it tomorrow

    Illusionniste already did your review. Petty good story, but I feel like I need more. No, I'm not addicted. Anyways, here's the links I recommended that would help you write smut with a bigger vocab:

    https://laurelclarke.com/2014/08/18/sexy-thesaurus-romance-erotica-words/

    https://laurelclarke.com/2015/07/18/the-sexy-thesaurus-list-action-words-to-use-in-your-romance-novel/

    https://laurelclarke.com/2018/06/25/the-sexy-thesaurus-3-description-words-to-use-in-your-romance-novel/

      ephemery just reviewed yours. I will say this right now though Keep up the good work, it was without a doubt a good story and was not short on any details.

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