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started less than a month ago, writing about all the history stuff, military&wars, kingdom building. Thanks mate for the opportunity.
Im willing to review the work of new authors, drop here
HotRedFlaming Thank you. Its very helpful. Thanks a lot for giving such a constructive feedback review.
I am sorry... I failed to understand your instructions. Just ignore what I posted earlier. Thank you! :)
I've unnoticed for a long time and starting to join a contest with new novel. TT
Mine is 4 chapter already (3 and 1 prologue) if you don't mind
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Hereโs mine, Iโm open to blunt constructive criticism since I know it would help a lot when it comes to improving my story. TIA.
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๐๐ ๐๐จ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฒ๐ญ๐ก๐ฌ
๐ถ๐๐๐๐: ๐ต๐๐๐๐๐๐ข, (๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐) ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐ฝ๐๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฐ๐๐๐-๐๐๐๐
๐๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ง๐'๐จ ๐ ๐ข๐ฎ๐ฉ๐, ๐๐ฉ ๐ข๐๐๐ฃ๐จ ๐๐ฉ'๐จ ๐ง๐๐๐ก. ๐ ๐ช๐จ๐ฉ ๐๐ค๐ง๐๐ค๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ฃ.
Cythera had many myths but there's always that myth. A story passed down from elders to their children until it became a myth.
Hidden in these lands, sleeps a woman. They call her Mistress of Cythera, said to have the magic of every element know; a gift from the goddess Cytheria Herself, they said. Some said she is the daughter of two higher Gods, Cytheria and Oikos but was given a task to heal the lands once it is needed.
Cytherians feared and worship her.
Said to have the fiercest auburn hair to have, a beauty that may rival the other Higher Goddesses, the Mistress helped Cythera thrived until she left. The people knew the reason why she left, they abused her powers, always calling for help but never thanking or heeding her advice until she grew tired of fixing every problem they have. Angered by their ignorance, it is said that the Mistress have decided to give judgement once she awakes.
The Elders have told their children to never disrespect the lands or face they wrath of the Mistress.
The stories being spread by the scholars that the Mistress hides and sleeps to regain her lost power but the others believed that she left because the Mistress didn't like what she saw in Cythera and returned to her parents.
But they didn't know she was waking.
๐๐ง๐๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ก๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ญ๐ฒ
๐ถ๐๐๐๐: ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ต๐๐๐๐๐๐ข, ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ด๐๐๐๐๐๐
๐ผ ๐ฌ๐ค๐ข๐๐ฃ ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ ๐๐ง๐๐๐ฉ ๐๐๐๐ช๐ฉ๐ฎ
Cerise is known for having an unearthly beauty in the paranormal community, men flocked to her in hopes of becoming hers, women either hate or want to be her. Beautiful women are dangerous, especially if there's a history she can not run from.
๐ผ ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ฉ ๐๐ฃ๐ฉ๐ง๐๐๐ช๐๐จ ๐๐๐ง
Deimos, the King of Vampires has taken interest on the woman every man yearns for. Everything about her captivates him, even knowing this woman is dangerous to his kingdom, he wants her in his bed. She tempts him with her wicked smile, her touch seduces him, her entire presence sparks something dark in him.
๐ผ ๐๐๐๐ฉ๐๐ก๐ฎ ๐จ๐๐๐ง๐๐ฉ
Cerise has a dangerous past that she can not escape and now, it's catching up to her. All the work she created in the human realm are now being threatened by the very thing she fears. Her dangerous past has now entangled Deimos and Cerise needs to protect him before it's too late.
Hi if you have time, please do a review in my novel. I started this a month ago. The story is currently ar 57 chapters. Its title is "Into the Zombie World".
Here is the link to the novel.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/into-the-zombie-world_17265526105108805
Thank you very much.
Done with urs, I hope I didnt hurt your feelings, u all had good potentials by the way, u had ur share of strengths and weaknesses. I hope u can improve.
And Im.gonna stop here for now, lol Others are for later
Neil_Ads ur work seems already there and climbing, I dont think I would help much.
HotRedFlaming oh, okay. But I don't think so, I am always wiating for reviews so I can know my shortcomings to improve on them.
Hey, could you check out my book, It currently has 12 chapters,
You can be honest with your critique because I really need to know what Im doing wrong and how can I improve.
My book https://www.webnovel.com/book/16991910705054005
Thanks
HotRedFlaming.
Title:what is it like to be a Knight
Genre:fantasy
Synopsis:
Blaze tries his best to become a knight
HotRedFlaming Go to the market.
Mine here. Thanks for any reply.
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this is my book and I am looking for honest reviews. I appreciate the ones so far but I want an honest critic. Thank you.
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Hello, there. I'm excited that you're doing this and offering people some form of constructive outlet for their creativity ease, don't spare me, tell me what you think
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Mine only have 7 chapters and I struggle with daily updates, but I hope you can help me by giving tips. I felt like my writing style is too direct and rough, so I worry that my readers can't understand what I'm trying to convey.
Please don't hold back.
Title: Lightning's Attraction
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/lightning's-attraction_17733820506737905
Synopsis: Pushed between two choices; A dead end and a promising future, Xing Zishen believes that he chose the right thing. Whereas his elders and fellow disciples who know nothing of him, nothing of his past, and nothing of the hole in his heart greatly disapproves.
*Sigh "Stick around for now. They'll think I've got you already."
Genre: Adventure, Cultivation, Bromance
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