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    Mine only have 7 chapters and I struggle with daily updates, but I hope you can help me by giving tips. I felt like my writing style is too direct and rough, so I worry that my readers can't understand what I'm trying to convey.

    Please don't hold back.

    Title: Lightning's Attraction

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/lightning's-attraction_17733820506737905

    Synopsis: Pushed between two choices; A dead end and a promising future, Xing Zishen believes that he chose the right thing. Whereas his elders and fellow disciples who know nothing of him, nothing of his past, and nothing of the hole in his heart greatly disapproves.

    *Sigh "Stick around for now. They'll think I've got you already."

    Genre: Adventure, Cultivation, Bromance

    At this point he left.Guys stop trying.Its too much for him.Xd I presume for he is offline and does not repsond anymore.

    Book Title (Veiled Saga: Conquest and Domination)

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    Synopsis
    "If I can't conquer your heart, I will conquer your land."

    He smirks in the heat of the moment, with drumming heart and trepidation from those audacious words he just declared.

    And finally, he dealt a spit for his last growl:
    "This world shall know Domination!"

    An Ex-General punished with a death sentence, transmigrated from the present back to the past years before his country was colonized.

    Or so he thought?

    Armed with the experience and knowledge as a General, he declares to conquer the world!

    Read as the story befitting of its title, unravels the mysteries of this newfound world, how will he conquer everything in his path to domination? The story behind his punishment, and the people that surround him.

    A Glorious Saga that re-writes history!
    ...

    This is my first novel on this platform, may you like reading my novel!

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/veiled-saga%3A-conquest-and-domination_17653481206236305

      Hey... I have recently joined webnovel. I was invited from wattpad to share my story on this platform. Till now I have updated the prologue and two chapters. New readers are welcomed along with there opinions. Here is the link of my novel. 😊
      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17808355606147405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313197602

      Title: Revenge Through The Broken Window
      Genre: Science-fiction

      Synopsis:
      It's a story full of suspense, thriller and romance. Some parts of this story are related to real life scenes.
      Here's a girl named Jupi who is a graduation final year student. She visits a hospital to grab the happiest moment of her after facing a lots of stuggle. But these visits turns out to be the twisting point of her life.
      Now who brings the twists and how!! To know this start reading the story.

        Title: Path of Supreme Being

        Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/path-of-supreme-being_17803268105985805

        Genres: Adventure. Action. Adventure. Reincarnation, Fan-Fiction, Marvel

        Synopsis:

        I Re-Birth on a different planet with a different name and different family and friends.

        In my 1st life, I was an Emperor, holding an army of millions I was named Alexander and was a 'MAN' close to 'GOD'

        In my 2nd life, I live in a different name, different world and different family, the same for my 3rd life it was normal and peaceful

        In my 4th life, I was once called 'Occupational hoarder' I'm a genius and talented person I can do everything and anything, I became a doctor, scientist, engineer, astronaut, etc, and cure multiple incurable diseases, illness and virus in the planet.

        in my 5th life is quite tragic, my past life was discovered and because of that I was played and killed, but God gave me another chance and I was reborn again but not on a normal planet but 'different' planet.

        It's called 'Marvel Universe'

        Come and join me on this journey.

        Extra info:
        2 ~ 3 chapt/day ~ 1500 ~ 700 words each.
        Read the first few chapters to get a proper feel of the novel. You will not be disappointed.

          Firstly, I just want to appreciate the helping hand, which you are giving to those who are new and feel apprehensive, whether their work gets recognized or not...Thank you very much...

          Title: VOICE

          Genre: Romance, Drama, Modern.

          (https://www.webnovel.com/book/voice_17809065306148905)

          Synopsis:

          How a mere Voice, strikes a chord, in the heart of a person???

          Does love has any limit???

          What is his love story???

          P.S: This is my first story in webnovel, there are some grammar mistakes, which I will proofread .

          Catson_kiyoyi

          But WN standards it was 9/10

          Story telling standards maybe at 6.8/10

          I think, since it was a good parody, but Im gonna post it here since the author doesnt demand a review but you, lol.

          For the flaws, first, I have went to many schools but I havent seen any gaming club, but I think this is passable since it might be realistic, but schools usually discourages unproductive stuffs, but regardless I think it was fine. And what does this club even do? Just play games entire hours? Next, I think the premise somewhat fell on the last chapter, I mean I thought the point of the story was for sachiko to stumble several times then at some point realize she was hopeless for Souta. But in the last chapter she became a president, and souta became the VP,. And also I think it was too early for sachiko to have such a high leverage. It would be interesting to see Sachiko entering the interview (by Souta) countless times, but fail, then resort to countless tactics, but fail again, yet she finds a way, those was what I expected. I want to see her struggle, but she became a pres even tho she aint much of a gamer, which I find kinda umm, not satisfying. But this was an early chap and the author seemed to have stopped but maybe this will still roll if the author continues his work. Cheers.

          U could correct me tho these are just my opinions

            Suezaro i won't pin my hopes then. just whenever. I'll just be here writing

                This is a female lead story...

                Tags: Romance, Fantasy, Slice of Life, Comedy, Weak to Strong, Adventure, Action

                  Title: I Can't Accept The Ending
                  Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-can't-accept-the-ending_17006081606253405
                  I only have gotten four chapters in. I need some constructive criticism because I don't feel like it's good enough, but I don't know how to change it. Could you also tell me how the synopsis is too? I don't feel like it will interest enough people. I would love it if you could be brutally honest with your opinion on it too. Well, thank you! Also if you have time could you give me a review.

                    Hi :) If you like fantasy with male lead, I'd be thankful for any advice and comments on my The Raven's Chronicles. I'm working hard on it, and I hope you'll like it if you decide to give it a try

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