I am a new author and I'm looking to get feedback and responces on how to improve my book as I want it to be improved upon with the aid and help of the community as I think my idea could be developed really well.
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I recently started writing in Web Novel and I have few chapters, I hope you read and leave your most honest review.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/el-elemental-salvando-el-otro-lado_18223323206909405
Name: The Elemental: Saving the Other Side
Synopsis: Ken, a young man from the school is transported to a medieval world where magic, strange creatures, sorcerers, witch and powers abound, the reason is that he must save that world, the advantages are that he knows those worlds according to the manga who has read and thinks he has experience, the downside is that not everything is like manga.
The protagonist will make incredible allies and face beastly enemies.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/kidnapped-or-protected_18272303705994405
He took a step forward and another. He looked at me playfully.
"Your heart starts beating a little faster every time I take a step in your direction" he said playfully.
He grabbed my waist and pulled me closer to him, I didn't do anything I just swallowed and tried to control myself and hoping he wouldn't do anything ...
Aurora (19 years old) lives alone with her mother, her father left her when she was 9, and she always says 'Well, I don't want such a man in my life, because even only thinking about leaving us alone is aready bad enough, but doing it is much worse'. But what if a day comes that she gets kidnapped or maybe protected? Aurora's life turns completely upside down will she survive this? Or is will be this her destiny? And who will she meet? Or rather say a handsom person who can't die with sharp teeth.
I just started writing my new novel. This novel is published in my second WN account. Check it out!
SYNOPSIS:
I was once a four-year old little girl who was a frog in the well. A spoiled little brat who got whatever she fancied because I am the only daughter of Alexander Cicero.
I could also fire someone I don’t like. I was surrounded with luxurious or expensive things.
As an aggressive little girl whoever get what she wanted, I thought I have everything on my hand and no one could defy me. However, that was all an illusion I created when one day I was abducted by secret organization.
I was hoping that the Cicero Family will find me. I never once lost hope because I know my father couldn’t sit still if I was not found.
But, they never found me. I always said to myself to stay strong and this will pass, someday.
From that day onward, my illusion shattered and awakened my world view.
They abducted me, not because of my family wealth but because of my High Intelligent Quotient (IQ).
At first, I didn’t know what they were after but everything cleared up when they created another … me.
Link- https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-girl-he-never-noticed_18203580905688405
Title-The Girl He Never Noticed
Synopsis- Kiarra Todds has been living under the impression her whole life that she would always be the nerd her school labeled her as. She had her choices sorted out, nothing would destroy her plan of somehow surviving the last year of school and then getting into a prestigious college as she had planned but one wrong move that's all it takes, that leads her in the trap and hit list of the school's most notorious and popular bad boy Twaan Cooper who never even knew that Kiarra existed.
Follow them in their adventure where Kiarra finds herself doing all the obnoxious things with Twaan that she never planned on doing. From sabotaging a wedding to thrashing the school. She soon discovers that she could be more than just a girl who's ignored by everyone but most importantly shed light in Twaan's life who's been hiding his pain under the influence that living a carefree life is the only way of not getting your heart broken. Again.
Only two broken people can fix each other.
For him she'll always be the girl he never noticed
Link- https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-girl-he-never-noticed_18203580905688405
Title-The Girl He Never Noticed
Synopsis- Kiarra Todds has been living under the impression her whole life that she would always be the nerd her school labeled her as. She had her choices sorted out, nothing would destroy her plan of somehow surviving the last year of school and then getting into a prestigious college as she had planned but one wrong move that's all it takes, that leads her in the trap and hit list of the school's most notorious and popular bad boy Twaan Cooper who never even knew that Kiarra existed.
Follow them in their adventure where Kiarra finds herself doing all the obnoxious things with Twaan that she never planned on doing. From sabotaging a wedding to thrashing the school. She soon discovers that she could be more than just a girl who's ignored by everyone but most importantly shed light in Twaan's life who's been hiding his pain under the influence that living a carefree life is the only way of not getting your heart broken. Again.
Only two broken people can fix each other.
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Please tell me how to improve, that would be cool
Synopsys: The Abyss is the place that people need to overcome so they don't suffer a violent death
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title: The World isn't as Ugly nor Beautiful as You Think
Genre: Fantasy, Comedy, B4W
The original translation of Dunia ini Tidak Seburuk atau pun Seindah yang Kau Kira by Desope
When I have a pen in my hand and paper before me, I think I want to write something to cast every despair in my pathetic life away. I have a figure of a depressed guy whose fate is too much: saving the world. He is not stupid nor even smart, he is not ugly nor even good looking. He is just a nijikon (A person who loves anime character or such more than real one) like me. He once thought to give up on life, but an event changes his life. I'm sure you guys start guessing how the story goes, but too bad, this one is different than the others.
LUCIFER’S HORRORS CIRCUS
WARNING!
By starting to read this story, you are taking the first step towards signing a pact with Lucifer. There will be no turning back, and by the time you finish the story, the deal will be sealed. You have been warned.
Jonah is a 12-year-old boy who has the head of a parasitic twin that failed to develop. At a very young age. Jonah is humiliated, and rejected by all the inhabitants of the village, who give him a fatal beating. Jonah ends up in a circus that is brought from the depths of hell and whose owner is Lucifer. The monsters, who live there, were normal person, who were forced to sell their souls to the Devil and now must spend all eternity as deformed circus monsters.
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- Genre(s): Action, Drama, Grimdark, Science Fantasy, Horror, Military, Seinen
Far away in the future set in the year of 2050 A.C.B, forget the power of technology and science, since it growing rapidly. Forget the promise of progress and understanding, this is the world where is no peace amongst all, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter, and the laughter of thirsting warlords, among all places, is TYZ (formerly known as Tokyo) before the Second Global conflict, now it is the largest and most populated city of the planet, beyond compare.
VX1118, also known as the Darkfallen, is a voracious mutagenic entity particularly dangerous to living beings. It can mutate, and even control hosts’ minds in an effort to perpetuate and evolves genetic mutations within its hosts.
The Fallenborn species who look exactly like normal humans but possess an inhuman abilities, along with superiority complex. These new breed of evolved sub-humans known as Mutants still living along sides among humans in the highly advanced futuristic country of TYZ under the Imperium of Brittonia Empire and it’s Totalitarian Regime. While most strive for a civil coexistence, mutants are generally met with fear, hatred, violence, envy, and discrimination. While some doesn't.
The gritty chronicle of the endless war between gruesomely violent Mutants race against the Autocratic human Empire playing the profane game of power, politics and brutal racial discrimination in a dystopic war-ravaged alternative universe.
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NAME: Covenless
GENRE: Urban-fantasy, Adventure, Action, Suspense, Thriller, Young Adult, LGBT
SYNOPSIS: Set against the backdrop of a magical urban metropolis, this sleek and edgy tale sees a Witch on the run from the law become the sudden object of interest for a number of the city's most dangerous covens.
After showing seemingly unfathomable raw talent in the mystic arts, Maeve Moloi becomes a coveted witch by all the covens in her city. But Maeve has far more important things to worry about than being in a dumb sorority of like minded witches: She has to figure out who killed her brother and why she's being targeted, too, before it's too late. As if that's not enough to worry about; a tenacious detective will stop at nothing to see her behind bars for a crime that she unwittingly committed.
Ancient wands, powerful secret magical sects, a war between covens, time travel and an ominous black egg which could spell the end of everything! All this and more in the first installment of the COVENLESS series.
NOVEL TITLE: Revenge Of Love
https://www.webnovel.com/book/revenge-of-love_18253915605908505
Author Name: Bano_Kanwal
Synopsis:
"I can agree with what you said, otherwise I don't believe him." Hoorain whispered sadly.
"Not even his love?" Akbar asked and she silenced.
"You mean ... you can't love me because I have so many lovers out there ...?" She smiled sadly.
"No! I just want to say that we; humans leave our loved ones behind and blindly run after that love which is really nothing but a mirage ...!"
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This story is about losing your love or choosing between two people you loved the most!... it's hard I know but you had to, otherwise you have no choice?
I hope you like it ....
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Hello check out my story
Title:lost and found
https://www.webnovel.com/book/lost-found_18203345506827005
Hi, this is my story Segregated is about an interracial love story in the 60s its also about gangsters.
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Title: Multi-Gene
Author: Typhlix
Genre: Sci-fi, Gene, Action, Reincarnation, Absolute body control.
In a world more advance than Earth.
Cells being Awakened,
Gene's Transmuting,
Gene pools being constructed,
Catalysts Manufactured,
Generic Nucleus harvested,
Survival of the fittest.
This is a novel unlike anything you've read before. The power levels are Amazing and the path to get stronger, Superb.
I assure you, it is the Genetic modification novel you've been searching for.
Try it.
Title: Reborn: The Childe's Consort
Link:
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Manager Store in unknown World
Special TAG : R-18
Hi guys,
I am writing a space thriller for ongoing competition.
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Title: Craving Temptation: Love Of A Vampire
Synopsis:
...From the moment that Sebastian Belmont lays his eyes on Anastasia Santi, he is captivated by her. She brings the temptation of what this Vampire Master craves the most. What is he willing to do just to have what he desires even more than immortality?...
.....He turns his face to look me in the eyes, his lips gently brush against my cheek. I freeze and gasp. It is like little sparks prickling my skin. His lips are soft but there is a different softness to him. I have never felt this feeling before. I amthe inches away from his lips, I can so easily kiss him.
As our eyes meet, I can see that same desire hiding inside them. I look down to his lips and them back up into his eyes. He is so close, so close that I can taste him. I can feel his warm breath linger over my lips. He slightly bites at his bottom lip and I swear my knees give in.....
...I look at her, slightly biting down onto my lip.
"Oh god you make me crazy when you do that".
The passion in me has once again grown out control.
"I am going to make you feel things that no man has ever done before" I gently cup her face in my hand and slightly lean it to the side. Her neck is laying bare and exposed before me now. I can see her vein throbbing and it peaks my senses.
I slowly lean in and open my mouth...
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