sets up her advertisement booth and proudly puffs up to say Hello Authors of glorious worlds and life defying stories. I'm easily amused and super creative. Give me your ideas and descriptions and i can easily add to. As I read, I'm happy to leave comments thoughts and suggestions for you to select from. I hope that my 1st reactions help give you insight on the affects of your writing.

I think outside the box with my ADHD. Example a tree = paper, tp, shade, fruit, nuts, homework, houses, twinning roots, chairs, wine, hair stick, bouquets, nesting, mudslide prevention, decomposing nutrients, water absorption, moss, webs, packaging, chinese take out, fire, a swing, shelter, chopsticks, rafts. These all connect to a tree.

😀 You can even hit me up just to be a chatty reader. I have my nest of fuzzy blankets and various snacks and drinks. All for me to further enjoy stepping into your world and translating your creativity into a live action movie in my mind.

rearranges her rabbit plushie as a pillow and gets back to reading I tore some tendons in my ankle, i got lots of time on my paws.

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I had to make an edit library and comment library. Please check if your book is in the correct one. Of course I also comment on edit ones. I have over 13 books to go through. 😅😆 I jump around and vote on them to let Authors know, YOU matter.

Takes longer to read some that need heavy editing, as in need to break out the keyboard and retype. Obviously I can't copy and paste to edit, there's no email option and it would be to long of a comment.

Some books don't grab my attention but I do see vaule in them. If I didn't, they'd get a mediocre review. In cases of a lazy author, that does not care about polishing their work, a negative review. Please warn me when it is a very rough draft and you don't want alot of editing comments. Otherwise I will run from a train wreck and hide. Very sorry about that but I did post that I have adhd.

As a long time reader, if you are able to hook me, I think it's sales worthy. Generally I buy fantasy, romance, sci-fi and mystery in book stores. So if I read beyound the first chapter, I am still impressed with other genres. Just might be hard to finish the ones that don't suck me into their world. I see your stories as movies in my mind, flow is important.

I don't like webnovel forcing or encouraging the format of writting each chapter in order. Hear me out. You get inspiration through out the days and some are for later chapters. Some ideas you are not sure about. You are fitting these pieces togather into a story. You are not a machine. I do not like forced work or word counting being put upon you. While writting a certian amount a week is a good goal, it loses inspiration.

    My story is called Hell's Academy if you want to read it. I love comments lol.

    Uhm, if you click on my profile you can get a link to it, so if you wish check it out and leave a comment - only if you like it.

      RazorIsSharp OMW i like demon stories, always nice when you can go outside of societies boundaries and forced coookie cutterness. Be brave be differ and have fun!!!

        7 days later

        My discord is also my name on here
        Mzmysteryy#5819

          PrincessDustbunny A bit late in seeing this. Wondering how my senses failed to detect this.
          I can advertise this story, considering you have a lot of time and mental space to invest yourself into some heavy reading. Regular light reading will leave you feeling confused about this book.

          Psychic Parasite is the name of this masterpiece, if I wish to say so myself. It is a science fiction, has elements of gore, with lots of action, politics, etc. Do check it out to see if it is to your tastes.

          Considering how descriptive this book is, it is the nectar for immersion. Puffs up his chest to proudly boast, sporting a smug look.

              8 days later

              Hello, I like chatty readers!
              If you like romances, I can suggest my books.
              This one is set in the far future. The world is similar to ours, actually, because development was stopped by wars (I know, I know, it's usually the opposite). It's a political intrigue mixed with action, cute moments and sci-fi:
              https://www.webnovel.com/book/unexpected-gift_15879155906315205
              Good side: it has 400+ chapters ;) (if you like it, it will use quite some of your free time)

              The other one is a historical romance, set in the middle ages of an alternative universe (I invented the names of the kingdoms and so on). It doesn't have many chapters, so you may want to wait before actually starting reading it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/crazy-duke-and-fallen-queen_18184242206746905

                6 days later

                xiaohai_23 ooooh nudge nudge i like the naughty books. Also true, sci-fi space focused romance is not common. bounces I'm jumping between books, those i was asked to help edit or comment. You just want comments? Some want edits or suggestions. Some like logic holes pointed out, flip side i'm okay ignoring movie/book logic that defies reality. I don't do spelling and punctuation. my grammar corrections are based on essay style so can they can be ignored. 🧐 hmmmm what else am i forgetting? Oh yeah, as you can tell I'm a sloppy typer/texter so i tend to fix others like mine, in my mind and continue on. I can point them out but i think the real editors can handle the boring part.

                    MzMysteryy Huggles, making sure i haz book in my library. Thank you for compliment. Might as well enjoy life and be merry about it. Smiles are free and priceless.

                      PrincessDustbunny It's sci-fi because it's in the future, but there is no space. It's in between dystopia and urban romance, with the dystopian part vaguely mentioned in the first chapters.
                      I hope you'll give it a try, though...
                      Well, I'd like to hear honest opinions, that's it. If you point out errors, be it grammar or plot, I'm happy as well. It's my first novel and I'd like to make it at least readable. I like critics, but it's difficult to get some honest feedback

                      P.S.: I hope your ankle is getting better :)

                        a month later

                        PrincessDustbunny Hello, sorry for disturbing but I've seen the comments on this thread. I just wanted to ask whether you forgot about my book or you didn't like it? If it's the latter, might you tell the principal reason? (for research purpose)

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