Hendinklette I gave you some feedback on the 1st couple of chapters in the paragraph comments. And use the phrase urban fantasy instead or magical realism. :-)
Thread For New Writers To Share
LVTeacherman It's so awesome to see fellow Authors helping each other out! <3
Alpha_Medic Well, if I weren't so busy teaching, writing and working on my masters, I'd probably be able to help more lol.
LVTeacherman Life is a thing, haha! It's still awesome that you put out the effort in your limited free time!!!
Alpha_Medic Well, that would explain why I don't sleep much.
LVTeacherman TBH, big mood. >.<
Alpha_Medic To be honest, that is my existance during the school year. During the summer and during breaks I do sleep a little more, but I have a very hard time turning off my brain at night.
LVTeacherman I feel that on a spiritual level. Sorry for the delay in replying, forums hadn't been working properly for me the last few days.
Alpha_Medic It's 2020... what did you expect?
I uploaded my book last October, but It doest got much response from the readers. Less than 30k words and ongoing, can I post it here? Do you allow me?
I'm new writer and I started writing last January, but the novel did not do well and I'm busy with school. Last month, I started to write again ( I cheated on my other novel ) hays, I hope you'll give my novel a try, it's a fantasy romance novel, also kinda gruesome. Can I post the link here?
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Give my novel a try :D
Name: Energetic Exchange System
Genre: Reincarnated, System, Action, Adventure
https://www.webnovel.com/book/energetic-exchange-system_18567525406325005
I'm a simple man.
I'm Arc, I woke up in the morning and then a system called the 'Energetic Exchange System' suddenly appeared right in front of me, and with that my life changed drastically.
I became a hero, a legend, a myth, you can hear my name in every corner of the world, it's awesome.
But like I said I'm just a simple man...
(About 4 chapters now.)
Hello, I love this idea! This is my first time ever coming to the forum, and this is great. I've started to write two books on webnovel before but due to personal reasons I had to stop. I just started my third and I will definitely be completing this one! Please check it out, and I'll glad do the same! It is a BL, if you personally don't like BL then you don't have to try it, just please don't leave bad reviews on it because of your opinions on BL. Thank you!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/099-elryke_18581062506379905
Short Summary: Finally free from the hold of the black magicians, Elryke is given a task he's never wanted, but can't turn down. In order to become what he needs to, he must grow stronger, strong enough to fight even a God. Thus begins the adventure of the tortured boy. Follow him as he learns more about the world, about love and friendship, and the journey he takes to find who he himself is.
Can anyone try to give feedbacks on mine? 
I'd love to improve
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18471140106956505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314653463
An ex-national swimmer diagnosed with a lung disease. When she finally had a normal life, a mysterious man suddenly came knocking on her front door, claiming to be her husband!
And what's more, she had a son with him! What on earth was happening to her?
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An amateur newbie looking for honest reviews to learn from mistakes and improve.
If interested then please do check my story out!
Link to my story- https://www.webnovel.com/book/royally-yours-till-the-end-of-eternity_18151692306619505
Genre- Fantasy Romance.
The setting is an alternate modern-day universe where Monarchy is the form of government.
It's full of love, feelings, past and present relationships, secrets, mysteries, court schemes, faceslaps, revenge and hidden truths waiting to be uncovered.
This story revolves around the royal family of the kingdom of Neviza, one of the largest and strongest empires, previously ranked third among the top five before ascending to the first position after the reigns were inherited and held by a certain emperor with heavenly looks, a sharp mind, cold gaze, ruthless nature and a frozen heart which beat for one single person. The only one whom he gazed at with adoring warmth in his eyes, pampered with extravagant riches and showered with passionate kisses.
This is the story of how a prince was forced to leave the princess of his heart before an emperor returned to claim his empress.
I hope my story is given a chance!
Thank you!
Gnaipafe Sorry, I'd recommend you try the stickied thread for older novels. I wish you the best of luck on your story, though. May it bring you much success!
Could someone give my story a try and if they like to leave a review?
Could someone give my story a try and if they like to leave a review?
I'm new here and I've just started writing my first English novel. I hope you can check it out.
TITLE: INTERTWINED
Author: Chweetsie
TEASER:
KC, the shy and sheltered heir of the Dostoevsky Group of Companies, experienced a number of traumatic incidents at a very young age.
She witnessed how her parents were brutally killed when she was just 7 years old that made her a bit introverted and have some social anxieties.
Tin, on the other hand is like a breath of fresh air. She loves to paint and express her feelings through that. She always follow her friend Sandy who always take the lead.
Sandy, the fighter and liberated one was the most protective of KC. She’s dominant, aggressive and will do anything she thinks is good and right for KC. She doesn’t conform on what other people say.
The two, Tin and Sandy, were tasked to take care and protect KC by none other than KC’s only family—her tita Yumi and tito Tor.
They report to them, unknowingly to KC.
Nikolai, on the other hand, is the most popular singer in the Philippines and KC’s soulmate, according to her.
KC has been in love with him ever since she was in studying in high school in the States.
She had been dreaming of meeting him in person especially that he is under the management of their recording company in the Philippines.
She decided to work as a regular employee in the company after she took up her master’s degree in the States and go undercover to make sure that Nikolai would fall in love with her as the simple girl she really is—without the connection of the Dostoevsky’s.
Fortunately she was able to make him fall in love with her, she thinks.
But she doesn’t believe in sex before marriage. She wants to do it on their first night as husband and wife.
What happens if Sandy and Tin fell in love with Nikolai as well?
And to her KC’s shock, she is actually pregnant when she had never been intimate to any man before?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/intertwined-(english)_18614341005315405
Hello! I am a new writer here, and I am posting the following two novels:
Our Dreams Follow
Genres: Romance, Comedy, Quick Transmigration, System, Fluff, Male Protagonist, Strong Female Lead
Summary: He was tired. He lived in a loop: same suffering, same hatred, same ending.
He was falling. He kept gaining and losing, gaining and losing: family, friends, love.
He was dying. He kept falling asleep, dreaming of never waking up.
What was the purpose of his existence? A mere observer of countless worlds, stories and people?
Voices whispered in his dreams.
“Wait for me.”
He was waiting. But for how long? For how long before he tired, fell, and died?
“Wait for me.”
He was waiting.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/our-dreams-follow_18555828806277605
The World Towers
Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Action, LitRPG, System, Male Protagonist, High Fantasy
Summary: The world used to be normal. The poor worked, tired, and slept. The rich laughed, drank, and slept. Whether you were a farmer, a warrior, or a mage, you knew your place in the world. You knew how to survive day by day as nations waged war and droughts destroyed crops. You kept your head down and prayed. Or you stood up and had your head cut down.
Until one day, God spoke.
[Your world will be tested.]
Towers rose from the depths of the earth, tall enough to pierce the skies.
100 floors. A single trial.
Power, fame, glory. All at your fingertips.
Monsters raged against villages. Storms descended upon cities.
The world changed. Life for many worsened.
But you had a chance. 100 floors. A single trial.
A chance to change everything.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-world-towers_18555941106277905
Thank you in advance for checking them out!
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Novel name: RISE OF KING ARTHUR
Genre: Fantasy,mature,Harem,Adventure,R-18.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-king-arthur_18601387905266505
Synopsis
In a fantasy world where there is magic, martial arts, various fairy and demon race, where magical beasts roam, Our MC Arthur is getting bullied for his meek personality. When he turned 19 he was assassinated even though he is a noble. But he travels back in time and gets a system called the Lust King System.
So he starts his life again but this time he will do things differently....
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Only five chapter released.
Feel free to leave a review.
a year later
Synopsis:
Is immortality a gift or curse? For 8 the suicidal immortal the answer is quite clear. But making his death wish a reality won't be an easy task. The Broken Wastelands are full of anomalous places that break the rules of physics, time and space, offering fates worse than death especially to an immortal such as 8. The people of the wastelands are no less dangerous, turning to fanatical and strange ways of life in order to fit the chaotic and twisted lands they call their home. What will 8 find first? A way to end his life once and for all? Or a purpose strong enough to make him abandon the search for death?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/8-the-infinite_21367572206295505
Title:THE HENCHMAN
Genre:Crime, REVENGE
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Summary
Hae Won has been abused her entire life,just when she thinks she can catch a break as her father passes away another man comes into her life and tortures her beyond breaking point. She almost gives up but then she decides to be brave and bring this man to justice even though her means might not be quite legal.
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I had high hopes for my novel until I was dragged down back. Little views and some collections. Got tired.
By the way, here's my book link
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19521000605531505?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313692398
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/20915687606240405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313692398
Title: My Alchemist System
Genre: System, Isekai, antihero
Synopsis:
Blade a boy who lost everything in his life, his best friends and his only love
He couldn't live without them anymore so he decided to commit suicide to meet them again in the after life.
But it seems like that won't happen as planned, because when he died he was in a kind of heaven and meeted a goddess who told him that he will be reincarnated in a other world
What will happen in the new world
Will he find happiness in the future or will he just fall deeper into despair?
https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-alchemist-system_21341541305989005
It's my first light novel, also don't worry about the grammar, I found an editor and I will soon fix the first chapters
Tile: the masked rider Zorro
Genre: Action, adventure, comedy, growth, daredevil, and hoaxer
Synopsis: When the wicked rise, the word goes out: Calling on the masked Rider. In the past that was true, but after sixty years of peace he was forgotten. In the last few years the government had allied with the gang for illegal trafficking of weapons, drugs and humans. Now when drug crazed gang members lose a bet on a horse race they end up burning the horse racer’s home. They ended up killing a part of the Delaveaga household, which makes the masked man return.
I only have four chapters so far. I know my novel does not have the best grammar and my ideas need to be more clear to my audience. I will try my best to be good as my story continues.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/21195110906801905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4318632508
WEREWOLF FAN?
Title : The Eye of Blessed
Genre: Fantasy(Female Lead)
Synopsis: Always in the thought of exploring herself and the world to be an independent and strong girl instead of being a weak cute little girl, How will Nina tackle if she is connected to a mysterious forest with werewolves in the name of LOVE in the middle of her journey?
Will destiny and her werewolf lover help her in achieving her goal to become an independent woman?
Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-eye-of-blessed_21281777206050205
Give it a try!! Hope you enjoy the plot!
Book_Pen how to get link like this
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Jennie_jen Paste your novel's link (http://wbnv.in/.......) in chrome or any other browser. Copy the url.
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The Day I Saw a God
Genre: romance, comedy, fantasy
This story is about a girl. Her name is Natsumi Furakawa. She is in a High School Girl. She lived in Tokyo Japan. She had A Normal Life. Though she was the Japan's most Richest Architecture's daughter. Suddenly One Day She Meet With Someone Who Told Her That She Is Going Die Today.
What Will Happen To The Girl?
What Will she do?
Read the story to know about what happened to her and all the other people that she will meet and she had meet will have there promised day. The day they die.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-day-i-saw-a-god_17907694705493305
Hope you enjoy it
Book_Pen thank you
LINK : https://m.webnovel.com/book/capturing-heart-of-the-devil_21380614005088405/%E2%98%86
Synopsis :
♡I was forced to marry a monster♡
"Where will you hide, my little doll?"
his husky voice passed a shiver in her spine
within next minute he pulled her out from the cupboard and pinned her to bed
"You cannot disobey me"
he said while gripping her chin hard, tears rolled from her eyes but she nodded her head obediently
"You make me sick and I will punish you"
he splitted venom with pure hatred while entering into her body again and again, she screamed in excruciating pain
"You're a virgin"
his words shattered, tears with pain and guilt running from her eyes
He stepped back from there and mumbled "No, it's not true, it can't be true, she can't be virgin according to my research" he left the room by leaving the weak body of helpless girl
Aaron Castillo the last prince of Castillo and the CEO of Castillo enterprises, the rude, arrogant and a totally spoiled rich pure playboy, most handsome the modern Greek god with terrific attractive personality
Abigail Wilson the youngest daughter of famous business tycoon who lives in the shadow of her elder sister Brittany Wilson, the real example of innocence and purity, she was grown with obedience and kindhearted
The girl who never witnessed love and affection, the man who never cared about love and affection were tied together
"Dad and Mom please don't do this to me"
she requested them by falling on her knees
"You're always a burden to us, atleast now be useful to our family"
without any mercy they expressed their hatred
Fate intertwined and in an overnight, the so called younger daughter of business tycoon became wife of royal prince and most powerful man in the country
"I can't marry sister's man and I can't cheat him in place of sister"
she said with innocence and guilt
"someone like you can't be this innocent and pure, just do as we said or else you know the consequences"
her parents threatened her and pushed her but not in front of aisle but infront of the gate to hell
She was an imposter to her sister, she was forced to get married to the man whom she never seen in place of her sister
The life after the marriage became more hell to her in the hands of the cruel prince, she never know what made him to hate her, she never know why he wants to take revenge on her
Every inch of her body is his to ruin.
Every bit of her soul is his to defile.
In a golden cage which he built for her, he intends to break her, he loves her within a moment he torments, this is the sweet and sour love of him
His bipolarness brings both fear and love in her, her tenderness softens his heart, he is the cure to her loneliness, she is the light in his dark life, but fate brings unexpected twists
Will her innocence and pure heart win his heart which is burning with revenge?
Can she teach him what is called as love? Will he ever understand her true character? Can she able to change him? Or will she run away from him
"I found your biggest secret"
the words which are the nightmare to her became true
"You can't run away from me"
the vibrations of his baritone sent shudders through her spine
"I'm not anyone's property Mr. Aaron Castillo"
her words made everyone stunned, the girl known for obedience talked back with courage and confidence
"I'm impressed Mrs. Aaron Castillo, you're mine now and always"
he gripped her waist while sealing her lips, but unexpectedly it costed a slap on his cheek but a smile formed in the corner of his lips while watching his innocent cat transformation into wild kitten
WARNING : mature content, R18, consists of rape and abusive theme, read at your own risk,
hello all I'm a father 2 and I currently work 2 jobs but I've always wanted to write stories just for fun. Please show some love if you can spare 15 to 20 minutes of your time to read my novel I will be updating every other day. I'm not looking for a contract just want to share my world though a novel
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/21341321906227705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316540702
(The Crimson Summoner)
This is about a girl who discovers she is powerful a summoner where she tries to learn more about herself and her powers so that way she can defend her people from a dark forces of the land
9 months later
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