Tangerqueen
Hi, since your novel is quite new, I couldn't really find anything nitpick at. Make mistakes or something, if you want constructive criticism.
Oh wait, maybe change Zap to something different. It just sounds very off to me. Perhaps "slay"... Hmm, it's quite hard. Maybe you can use a combination of words like, idk, "slaying strike" or something. I'm not very talented at naming things, so you will probably find something better.
For my novel, you don't have to read it all, give the first three chapters a read and if you like it and wish to continue, great. Or you can leave your first impressions.
Cheers.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/shades-of-the-new-world_18089753406363105