Hi i just want to share my book it's my first time to write here and I need a feed back on my story.. thank you :)

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18312771706315905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4314415521

You have a boyfriend his name is Patrick you been a couple for 4 years , but the problem is he keeps chasing another girl, until. He said he wants to break up, after your break up, the girl broke his heart, and now he wants you back.
But you don't want to because of locked of love until you saw Kevin the guy in your dorm, you pretend that he is your boyfriend and you have been live in for 2 weeks but Patrick doesn't want to believe that Kevin is your boyfriend so you approach him and kiss him on the lips.

    Wild_Bunni93
    Please try my friend's book Lucem Curbidus. It still has 4 chapters and it was amazing!

        aw, under 20k... looks at my books- dang it... I am 2x that
        Well this is nice of you. Don't exhaust yourself. _

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          Give my novel a try :D

          Name: Energetic Exchange System

          Genre: Reincarnated, System, Action, Adventure

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/energetic-exchange-system_18567525406325005

          I'm a simple man.

          I'm Arc, I woke up in the morning and then a system called the 'Energetic Exchange System' suddenly appeared right in front of me, and with that my life changed drastically.

          I became a hero, a legend, a myth, you can hear my name in every corner of the world, it's awesome.

          But like I said I'm just a simple man...

          (About 4 chapters now.)

            I'm new here and I've just started writing my first English novel. I hope you can check it out.

            TITLE: INTERTWINED
            Author: Chweetsie
            TEASER:
            KC, the shy and sheltered heir of the Dostoevsky Group of Companies, experienced a number of traumatic incidents at a very young age.
            She witnessed how her parents were brutally killed when she was just 7 years old that made her a bit introverted and have some social anxieties.
            Tin, on the other hand is like a breath of fresh air. She loves to paint and express her feelings through that. She always follow her friend Sandy who always take the lead.
            Sandy, the fighter and liberated one was the most protective of KC. She’s dominant, aggressive and will do anything she thinks is good and right for KC. She doesn’t conform on what other people say.
            The two, Tin and Sandy, were tasked to take care and protect KC by none other than KC’s only family—her tita Yumi and tito Tor.
            They report to them, unknowingly to KC.
            Nikolai, on the other hand, is the most popular singer in the Philippines and KC’s soulmate, according to her.
            KC has been in love with him ever since she was in studying in high school in the States.
            She had been dreaming of meeting him in person especially that he is under the management of their recording company in the Philippines.
            She decided to work as a regular employee in the company after she took up her master’s degree in the States and go undercover to make sure that Nikolai would fall in love with her as the simple girl she really is—without the connection of the Dostoevsky’s.
            Fortunately she was able to make him fall in love with her, she thinks.
            But she doesn’t believe in sex before marriage. She wants to do it on their first night as husband and wife.
            What happens if Sandy and Tin fell in love with Nikolai as well?
            And to her KC’s shock, she is actually pregnant when she had never been intimate to any man before?

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/intertwined-(english)_18614341005315405

              Hello! I am a new writer here, and I am posting the following two novels:

              Our Dreams Follow
              Genres: Romance, Comedy, Quick Transmigration, System, Fluff, Male Protagonist, Strong Female Lead
              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/our-dreams-follow_18555828806277605

              The World Towers
              Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Action, LitRPG, System, Male Protagonist, High Fantasy
              Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-world-towers_18555941106277905

              Thank you in advance for checking them out!

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