Ba_nks I'm done with yours..
Nice plot, you have a unique romance story... The only thing that I wanted to point out is the long paragraphs and sometimes you mixed two people talking in them and got me confused as to whom was speaking.. Your paragraphs could be reduced a bit, it helps the reader to keep up and avoid confusion.... Just my opinion
Dara_Manuel
- Aug 18, 2022
- Joined Aug 2, 2020
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Bunny_Junnie here
http://wbnv.in/a/c6frgyS
If ou cant find just look for >>>>>>>> Stay' with the apostropheBa_nks sure, Will start with yours as soon as possible
Bunny_Junnie Done with yours.... Your story line has great potential... As for the grammar mistake I advice you to use grammarly, it helps me alot as English is also not my first language, I hope it will be of some help to you
Bunny_Junnie will start yours as soon as possible
Yusuf_I_JR and just one thing... The xhapters you posted so far a good, but you could easy up on the long paragraphs.
Yusuf_I_JR sorry for the trouble. And thanks I also finished yours
Yusuf_I_JR sure, will start with yours as soon as possible
Julie_Ahn_2826 Done with yours as well. I'm glad I came across your work its worth the time.... Wanted to review after 7 chapters but ended up reading 17
NicholasZZ Done with yours
blossoms_hkhk add to my library
Ash_khanal appropriate it
blossoms_hkhk Done with yours
Ash_khanal Done with yours
VanillaBearFantasy sure, added to the library
Ash_khanal will start yours now
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Biva Done with yours
Biva starting with yours now