Hi guys!

i am new to this writing platform and I will very much appreciate it if you could share some critics whether it's about my grammar, my character background, or the flow of the story. Since I just got back to writing after more than 5 years of hiatus, I hope you could help me become better again.

Here's the link to my story:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/luna's-diaries_18722276206893505

I dont read stuff like this cuz im a male, but the 1st chap is kinda good that read it til the end, though I have some questions how she lost everything which I hope can be answered in next chaps. And although cliche (hot, rich guy transferred student which may or may not be a ceo), has a new approach on how they will get close with the FL.

    HotRedFlaming Wow!! This means a lot to me. I've actually already plotted the entire story and decided that this will be worth 3 books. And yes, the whole mystery with regards to the past of the main character will be slowly folded in the next chapters.

    Although the guy isn't really rich. He's a transferred student with a scholarship. But you will also get to know him more if you will continue supporting my story!

    Again, thank you so much for this.

        theanneleen I'm very sorry, it's very short, but I can't give a proper review, as I've yet only read a single chapter, but I promise to edit, and improve my review, in the future, if you release more chapters, accordingly.
        Pros: The beginning of the story is very interesting, it keeps the reader coming back for more.
        Cons: Grammar mistakes, there may not be many, but even the smallest of errors are very noticeable, and may irritate some readers.

            theanneleen Aww, no problem, and please do update me when more chapters are out, I'd love to read them, and update my review, I can assure you, that this is a very promising book, please don't give up on it, I'm always here to help if you need me! 😄

                Hii all,

                I'm new on here and look for people who want to review my story confessions of a blogger.

                It's romance, I will love to give you feedback, reviews and good rating in return and hope people read this who want the same thing.

                6 days later

                [unknown]

                Hello! I'll review your book and if you're interested... Mine?

                I am a new writer on this platform and is looking for people who would like to review my Novel; Roses Are Red, War Is Black!

                It follows a different species main protagonist as they trudge through a divided world amongst humans and trolls. There will be romance, bloodshed, and slow character development!

                https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18765450505913905?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315044108

                This book is currently participating in the Underdog Protagonist writing contest! So the book is brand new and in need of Votes/Comments/Reviews! If you're interested, please check it out before the contest is over!

                -KannySenpai

                23 days later
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