Hello!

I am currently in the mood to review/critic a certain kind of romance novel. No Harlem, no systems, no fancy CEO or rich family, a unique and raw love story with hardships that will continue my interests!

Please post below if you have any suggestions for a unique love story romance

  • With my criticisms, I will offer blunt, positive feedback and suggestions to better further your writing experience and am mostly interested in NEW Novels that need comments/Reviews/Critics!

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-KannySenpai

    KannySenpai

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    Poisonous Lips [Pitiless Murder]

    GENRE: Contemporary Romance

    BLURB: Cynthia and Shade were friends from childhood who happened to grow together and faced the challenges life brought to them together but everything changes, the moment they got admitted into the university and Shade got the love Cynthia could not get. Cynthia then became the wolf in sheep's clothing looking for a way to get what she wants by all means that comes her way.

    [https://m.webnovel.com/book/poisonous-lips_17943751706796305]

        KannySenpai

        Hi KannySenpai!

        My book is actually a bit old in terms of what you need, but so far, it hasn't gotten any views nowadays and I guess I may have done something wrong with the title/synopsis... or even the story itself ; Probably the story? I'd definitely appreciate some feedback if you're willing to give it a read. It's a Contemporary Fantasy with a lot of Slice of Life with a very cute Male Lead and an awkward Female Lead.

        Thank you in advance~

        Mr. Moon Rabbit, I'm Not Yours!
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            My all novels are fantasy romance each has a unique twist in it hope you like any. Reviews and comments are highly appreciated
            My roommate is a devil
            https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-roommate-is-a-devil_18707601006836005
            Entwined souls
            https://m.webnovel.com/book/entwined-souls_18615498805321605
            My fairytale
            https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-fairytale_18800096006221205

            Where the dream losts
            https://m.webnovel.com/book/where-the-dream-losts_18262567805953605

              Hi! Why don't you try this one!
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              When a mundane, idyllic life is finally disrupted by approaching death, unraveling memories, strange conversations, and blossoming love.
              June is your typical high school loner who prefers to use her astronomical brain to question the world than learn how to make friends. Others think she's spoiled, snobbish, arrogant, but within her is three years' worth of forgotten memories she cannot pull to the surface and strings of complexities from being an adopted child. However, one day as she winds up on her haunted territory to eat lunch, she sees a rather unexpected presence; the school's dreamy hero, Daire, who seems to be hiding a life-changing mystery.

              https://www.webnovel.com/book/death-is-beautiful..._18788658906170105

              4 months later

              Both my works are heavily influenced by thriller themes and royal hierarchies. The romance is slow-burn but it is definitely worth the steam!!! Both works are female leading and involve many strong female characters as well. LGBT themes apply, including intense ML's. Both of my stories include darker themes, so that is also something to note. I hope you can give these works a try since it does involve a lot of genres besides romance!!

              The Last Amulet: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-last-amulet_16584182106586305
              Laws of the Modern-World Duchess: https://www.webnovel.com/book/laws-of-the-modern-world-duchess_17254530405065805

                3 months later

                The Tale of a Pearl

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                Hi everyone! I’ve just started publishing my new book. It’s called The Tale of a Pearl and it’s about a cold, callous prince falling in love with a sassy, clever mermaid princess in a world where both clans have lived in constant enmity for years.
                Try it if you like:
                Obsessive Male Lead
                Sassy but strong Female Lead
                Some moments of sorrow
                Convoluted story/ twists
                Second chances
                Tale-like stories
                Romance Fantasy
                Eastern Elements
                Hope you’ll give it a try!
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                  My novel, MORTAL GODS: Enouka is crazy original. It fits your requirements perfectly as it is indeed a unique love story romance

                  It is also an action-adventure fantasy book with magic, gods and superpowers.

                  I would love a review too.

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/mortal-gods-enouka_20053124306066605

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                  Synopsis:
                  A prisoner out for revenge, a power-hungry redhead, a fallen god and a little princess with superpowers and an impossible quest, go all out in the fight to acquire the power capable of destroying the multiverse. Whether it is to save a kingdom, to get revenge, for world domination, or merely to fall in love with it, none of them can do without this power... and so they bring Carnage! This is a tale of revenge, of betrayal, of love and of powers.

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