Hey buddy, I read your story and left my thoughts in a review. Great start! Moves at a cracking pace and had me glued to the screen. Also love the humor to break up all the action and adventuring quite nicely. Really good stuff.
If you could take a look at my story and leave a review, I would greatly appreciate it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/city-of-vengeance_18729317605753805