Hello, this is my first novel, so I want to see how good or bad my writing is. So, please read my novel and give me some advice or correction on my reviews

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Title:
One Dream: The Highest Dream Will Fall Among the Stars

Genre:
Teen, Sci-fi Adventure, Mystery

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    yu_tanit im done with yoursss and ive dropped loooots of comments too hehe thanks! <3

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