How can I make my novel more unique?

albakata · Feb 4, 2021

Hey guys! So I’m at a stomp here as my brain can’t come up with more creativity for my novel. There are a lot of transmigration and fantasy stories here that it’s getting repetitive. I want to stand out more and make sure my readers are getting something fresh.

Any suggestion is appreciated!

Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/panolethria-saving-the-multiverse_19205519706786705

For more background:
My novel is entitled “Panolethria: Saving the Multiverse” and it’s about twins who got sent out to a different universe because of a familial duty. Throughout their kin, everyone was required to successfully meet with Destiny and hold a bargain with it. For centuries, only the twins were able to do it.

In the new universe, they’re forced to blend in while doing their best to survive. There’s no typical system here or cheat codes. They have to work their way to the top on their own—a more realistic way of training and working hard.

Near the end of the novel, I will be placing a twist on the story. But before then, I’m thinking what I could do to improve it?

Thank you so much for reading until here! I hope you can impart some of your knowledge with me T___T

TofSpades · Feb 8, 2021

albakata I think giving the characters a goal or small hurdles that they need to overcome helps. Small hurdles that build up to the main problem, that's one way your plot won't ever get boring. Think of plot twists too, readers will stay captivated if they come across something they didn't expect.

You're probably a more experienced writer than me anyways, but here are some basic tips. ;)

darkkelbek · Feb 10, 2021

try something like this is you lack of originality at the beginning, try something like this to start cross novel, for example klean, from "the lord of the mysteries" reach the apex of his path and after saving everyone and after 1000 years he go into a journey explore others univers, or multi-univer, in his way he did stop in some world and in some of then he did help some people he befriend and connect the spirit world with the real world in some so they can has access to beyonder powers, and those people create their own tarot club but because the rules set by klean to no interfire with the fate of this world they never try nothing to big and most of the time stay in the shadows of their world, most of then live in the spirit world but there where always their trace and the mark or card with the name of the tarot club, and in this way you can add you main character in the story like, its been 500 years since kelan past by that world, go to another one and the main plot in the story in that world is about to begun, and you can say that they are a little more flexible with their rules now, or just sequences 5 and lower are allow to interfire with the world fate and even those of the path of the hanged-man and devil are choice among people that will have more control on themselve and you can have more than 1 main character, and you can use this formula for every cross over and those rule will limit the power of the beyonder depending of the world or cause the world supression, you can make it like beyonder can practice others power or way to get stronger cause their path is the path that allow them to return to the origen and others paths are path that are about ascending... My english is not my main language.