alienfrommars Starting your story. If I appear super picky, it is because I genuinely think you write well and I need to try extremely hard to pick it apart.

alienfrommars I know you didn't ask me directly, but I figured you were looking for anyone to review it. If you feel like doing mine...

Here is mine:
Your Last Life
https://www.webnovel.com/book/your-last-life_19340997805049205
After a long campaign, Lord Martin has finally fulfilled his destiny by conquering the last bastion from the Divine Order. With nobody left to defy him, he is now free to do as he wishes... As he is claiming victory, he is urged to save the world he just conquered from an unlikely source.

โ€œSave this world? Why would I need to save it? This world is mine, I am the one who conquered it!โ€

His journey begins with the end of it.

    LordSputnik Great! I will read yours later and review it tomorrow! Also, thank you for your input. I really appreciate it as I've been starving to hear a helpful feedback (not saying the reviews I've received so far are not helpful) but in a way just like what you've just left! Thank you!

      Review swap anyone?
      i only review after seeing yours on my book. I'm always online.

      if you think he is unapproachable, dangerous and scary, the you haven't met the other half that the moon goddess gave him.
      Angelo is chaos, but his mate is absolute destruction, but a beautiful one. despite being on opposite ends of the sword, they have to come together like two peaceful streams and save the werewolf rce, just like every alpha king and alpha queen. the only problem with this particular set of wolves is that they cannot stand each other. and the fact that they are mated is not going to make it easier for them.

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/19134030506540205

      not your typical love-hate werewolf story.
      Warning: Reader might want to hunt the author because of the emotional imbalances while reading

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