Do your worst

I mean it

A hitchhiker, a house, and sausages

I need someone to absolutely tear this down. It’s a short one-shot, only 3000 words. So use the time normally invested in reading, to brutally and unapologetically tell me what you don’t like about it.

People seem far too afraid to get a bad review in return, but I need someone to tell me what’s good and what isn’t good about my work. So please. Use all your frustration and stress from work/studies and tear this story down. Don’t hold back.

    Thank you ALL so much for the support so far!! It's now the final moments for WPC 162!! PLEASE READ!
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    It's the last day of WPC #162 and I'd love to Review Swap with anyone here

    I'm doing my best to produce a high-quality piece of work and really am putting in the effort. Please, if you leave a review on my story New World's End I will return a review.

    As I said last day of WPC so if you have any spare power stones to donate, that would mean the WORLD.

    Your help is so appreciated. I will be reviewing works throughout the night!

    New World's End:

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/new-world's-end_19430145306445605

      Title: The Demon Lord's Hero
      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-demon-lord's-hero_18131619205386105
      Genres: Fantasy
      Tags: Adventure, R-18, Gay, Violence, summoned hero, World Domination, polyamory, boy love, evil-protagonist, mature-content
      Synopsis:
      Gavin was your average high school nerd; loner, preferred books over people. One day, out of the blue, he was summoned to a world filled with magic and creatures straight out of a fantasy novel.
      He was told that the Demon Lord was about to attack the kingdom and he was the only once who could stop it all. He was also told that he wouldn't be able to return home until he killed the Demon Lord.
      Little does he know, the Demon Lord knows all about him and has plans for him. The Demon Lord want to make the Hero his and for the two of them to take over the world together.

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