Hi good day everyone, this is my first time seeking some review from a fellow writer so, i'm searching anyone who want to swap review with me. My work is based on light novel so sorry in advance if the way i wrap it didn't took to your liking.

Here's my work: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-rubrum-columbae_19052776906230205
Still considering to give an illustration for the character or not~

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