Tokio999 Did yours as well. Overall excellent, but the grammar detracts the reader from the story.

Here is mine:
Your Last Life
https://www.webnovel.com/book/your-last-life_19340997805049205
After a long campaign, Lord Martin has finally fulfilled his destiny by conquering the last bastion from the Divine Order. With nobody left to defy him, he is now free to do as he wishes... As he is claiming victory, he is urged to save the world he just conquered from an unlikely source.

“Save this world? Why would I need to save it? This world is mine, I am the one who conquered it!”

His journey begins with the end of it.

      Biola_Buzzybees1 No broken heart intended, I do understand that my personality is very difficult to deal with. Honestly your grammar was good enough that I couldn't tell that English is a second language for you. If anything, I was trying to be apologetic because I couldn't immerse myself as much as I like to in everyone's story when I review them.

          LordSputnik

          So in my review, you said I'm more than welcome to ask for your opinion... So if you don't mind, I'd like you to read my book again, preferably in your leisure time. Then tell me me what I did wrong in the comment section. As much as I want you to be honest with me, I wouldn't be able to take your honesty in plain view... My poor heart is really fragile😞😇. If your correction is going to be brutal then i'd rather take it in private. Perhaps by mail?

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