Great_Agbai_Otisi ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ okay i dont even know cause that didn't even look like a review to be honest. Felt like you didnt even open the book. Its a bit unfair as i like to go through everyones book thoroughly and suggest any improvement if need be.
I did check out yours though
It's under the category for horror and thriller but i didn't get any suspense or any horror vibes from it.

DaoistUcevhO Excuse me, for your kind information I didn'task you for review swap. You did it on your own. Iโ€™m looking for an honest review and iโ€™m not desperate for a 5-star review.

You have to encourage and motivate new writers not discourage them.

And I gave you exactly that, an honest unbiased review. If you read the review I make suggestions for improving and never once do I say "It's terrible" or "it's bad". Instead, I offered advice for improving, things to consider, and even encouraged you to keep writing. I even point things out in specific chapters of things that I found awkward.

A review that is simply "I love the book a lot, the book is really nice. The fact that you write about Mythology is really overwhelming. I recommended this book for a read." (A review sampled from The Eye of Zeus ) Those kinds of reviews only serve as padding for numbers. I try to be honest with everyone and everyone's review I do is done the same.

    Kronos661 Did yours and I like where it's going. Keep improving and you will get more readers!
    Here is mine:
    Your Last Life
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/your-last-life_19340997805049205
    After a long campaign, Lord Martin has finally fulfilled his destiny by conquering the last bastion from the Divine Order. With nobody left to defy him, he is now free to do as he wishes... As he is claiming victory, he is urged to save the world he just conquered from an unlikely source.

    โ€œSave this world? Why would I need to save it? This world is mine, I am the one who conquered it!โ€

    His journey begins with the end of it.

      Melissa_sanda Did yours as well! Hope you keep at it!
      Here is mine:
      Your Last Life
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/your-last-life_19340997805049205
      After a long campaign, Lord Martin has finally fulfilled his destiny by conquering the last bastion from the Divine Order. With nobody left to defy him, he is now free to do as he wishes... As he is claiming victory, he is urged to save the world he just conquered from an unlikely source.

      โ€œSave this world? Why would I need to save it? This world is mine, I am the one who conquered it!โ€

      His journey begins with the end of it.

        Great_Agbai_Otisi Appreciated, I did yours as well... I will mark yours for a redo though because I feel you can improve a lot given time. Keep at it. I find that reading other books helps me figure out how I want to do certain things in my own, but that's just me.

        I appreciate your review!

          Tokio999 Did yours as well. Overall excellent, but the grammar detracts the reader from the story.

          Here is mine:
          Your Last Life
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/your-last-life_19340997805049205
          After a long campaign, Lord Martin has finally fulfilled his destiny by conquering the last bastion from the Divine Order. With nobody left to defy him, he is now free to do as he wishes... As he is claiming victory, he is urged to save the world he just conquered from an unlikely source.

          โ€œSave this world? Why would I need to save it? This world is mine, I am the one who conquered it!โ€

          His journey begins with the end of it.

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