Sorry, just realized you asked me to do this one and not the one you sent everyone else. I'll do that one as well though. Please note that I am by no means trying to discourage you with my reviews, I am merely trying to point out things that one can improve upon.

Here is mine:
Your Last Life
https://www.webnovel.com/book/your-last-life_19340997805049205
After a long campaign, Lord Martin has finally fulfilled his destiny by conquering the last bastion from the Divine Order. With nobody left to defy him, he is now free to do as he wishes... As he is claiming victory, he is urged to save the world he just conquered from an unlikely source.

“Save this world? Why would I need to save it? This world is mine, I am the one who conquered it!”

His journey begins with the end of it.

    LordSputnik Oh no worries, well I can't really see anything that is discouraging with your review. I am even grateful. And thank you so much in advance, for reviewing H.E.A too, I really wanted to know if that story of mine is still on the right track >﹏<. And please don't worry if my review for your book would take some time, I also wanted to give an honest review by reading it all just like what I do to others. Thanks again💞

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