miu_hozuki I actually really like your novel. The only thing I might suggest is tweaking the beginning, as it was slightly confusing, and might drive away new readers. Otherwise, well done!

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    I just re-organized it yesterday.. ! hmm.... Could you comment on the part that's confusing? I will see what I can do..

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