TailsOfHope

Me too, the only thing that was kind of confusing was the quotations which changed a lot (idk if that's a grammar rule or no because the only quotation rules I've learned was last year in gr.8 english tbh). Like from a colon to a period, tooooooo a comma. Other than that, there was a couple switches between first person and third person PoV that were for foreshadowing or they weren't and I'm just overthinking the story again. I would suggest (I think I forgot to say it...) adding a mystery tag because it really does feel more like a fantasy/mystery story than just a fantasy one... Other than that... I think I put it in the thingy.

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