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Weird_Unicorn Will check it out, here's my link https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-eye-of-zeus_18697276606796905
Weird_Unicorn Will check it out, here's my link https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-eye-of-zeus_18697276606796905
Wolfgirl1215 Thanks!
Here's my link, in case if you missed it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/detective-w's-mysteries_18500920105921105
David_Neilsen I did it! Thanks!
For people who are interested in reviewing my work, here's the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/detective-w's-mysteries_18500920105921105
Limpin_Technocat Thanks for the review. Reviewed yours !!!
The_Mad_Titan
Sure, i'll check it
The_Mad_Titan reviewed yours. Review mine when ever.
The_Mad_Titan reviewed yours. Review mine when ever.
JustLikeWriting777 Yes.. !
https://www.webnovel.com/book/tea-house-on-mount-tai_18626929305369505
I will be reviewing yours immediately.
CodeyVanilla okaay
Here's mine
http://wbnv.in/a/54fgxT6
The_Mad_Titan sure
Will do
CodeyVanilla done!
What about mine?
The_Mad_Titan done.
Have you do mine?
JustLikeWriting777 I will!
Can you do mine too?
http://wbnv.in/a/54fgxT6
Mel_Aniv Okay
JustLikeWriting777 done.
Please do mine.
http://wbnv.in/a/54fgxT6
Thanks.
Weird_Unicorn thanks...can I have your link??I think I missed it
Me too, the only thing that was kind of confusing was the quotations which changed a lot (idk if that's a grammar rule or no because the only quotation rules I've learned was last year in gr.8 english tbh). Like from a colon to a period, tooooooo a comma. Other than that, there was a couple switches between first person and third person PoV that were for foreshadowing or they weren't and I'm just overthinking the story again. I would suggest (I think I forgot to say it...) adding a mystery tag because it really does feel more like a fantasy/mystery story than just a fantasy one... Other than that... I think I put it in the thingy.
Katzenliebe You're wonderful! I also replied to your review actually, to explain the grammatical variation :)
Weird_Unicorn done already