After the great war reached the earth, mortals became the worldly hands of the gods. Battle champions of the gods and seekers of the hidden treasures. One of them was a young human boy named Chen. The chosen of a dying god. Sadly, his soul was unaligned to the universal system controlling the lost realms, but he was determined to survive the chaotic world.

Link: Ancient System

    Mel_Aniv i did yours!

    Not sure how helpful mentioning this is, while I really like your premise, I feel like your synopsis could be shortened and more succinct, because a lot of the sentences are basically repeats.

      Halfie_x

      Hi there buddy. I decided to take a look at your story and leave a review. Read all four chapters you have up so far and I loved it! Really well-written, great characters and the pacing keeps the reader wanting more. Can't wait to see where you take it. Keep up the great work.

      If you could take a look at my story and leave a review, I would greatly appreciate it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/city-of-vengeance_18729317605753805

        Halfie_x

        Just finished, couldn't really find anything to nitpick on. Sorry for the lacking review~

          Copper_mask Sure yours is pretty long though. I like to read the full story before I review so it may be a bit. I've added it to my collection.

          Johnsonlong696969

          Hey champ, I decided to take a look at your story and left my thoughts in a review. You write at a very high standard and your story has really started to come alive. Love what I'm seeing. Added it to my library.

          If you could take a look at my story and leave a review, i would very much appreciate it: https://www.webnovel.com/book/city-of-vengeance_18729317605753805

            Easy_Tiger I wasn't expecting to read kill bill and narcos meets old school Jackie Chan tonight but oh well I'm done with the review. Can't wait to catch up!

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