ArnoldAdi99 hey I read your novel I literally liked your novel ,the magical world of your and how well you've explained every single detail was impressive at some points it felt like I was reading ‘the last wish (witcher series) ' because of the magical theme but I noticed few problems too
There were grammatical mistakes that could create confusion for the readers , using of way too much conjunctions was spoiling the taste . But your knowledge of words was great I enjoyed it , work on these petty mistakes and you'll rock it

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