Your friendly, locally sourced nitpicker is back to provide commentary that may--or may not--result in eye-roll-induced injury to anyone generous enough to offer me an opportunity to nag.

Or perhaps you'd simply like a chance to reciprocate in kind?
My work is overdue a ripping into, so come take your best shot at: https://www.webnovel.com/book/rattus-rex_19524654305541205

In all seriousness, I'll tell you what I think, but I'm not going to review bomb anyone :).

    Easy_Tiger Just reviewed! Amazinggg job! Oh my gosh, your story pumped up my adrenaline and made my heart race. I love it so much. Keep it up cuz it has so much potential!!!

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