TheZombieAuthor Done the story is interesting but you need to edit and correct mistakes before publishing but I really loved it
Looking forward to more chapters
Oh and tell m what you think of mine please

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        salmakanzari1 I'm pretty sure every book doesn't deserve the same review. And I'm not slandering you. I'm just stating a fact. Would you really be happy with a sugar-coated mass-produced review? I mean some people would but, really?

            salmakanzari1 since you did read my book, it was only fair that I read yours. And I did. It's a good book but it has it's flaws. Feel free to delete my comments and review if you disagree. But I think you would benefit from learning more about grammar and tense. (And perhaps a little more about how storytelling works). Hope I'm not being too harsh

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