Davidwatts6957

Hey! I just reviewed yours back. I pointed some of the punctuation and grammar issues I saw. I hope it helps in improving your novel. I saw on your reviews that some of them points out your grammar but really give you any tips on it. So I kinda felt obliged to do so "

I hope you don't feel offended.

    ArnoldAdi99
    I gave you my review, mate! And added yours in my collection~
    Hoping that you could do the same~

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