Since noone was reviewing my story, I posted it here ,I really wish some one will read those 5 chapters and tell me how I am doing right now and what can be done right to improve more, I really think Constructive criticism is always needed but for now noone was reviewing,so I put it in here :'(

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I will consider this effort successful If even one person gives me his opinion on my novel.

    If you are into Dark Medieval Fantasy check out my latest piece, A World Asunder.

    Synopsis:
    Markus a young boy during the burning of Luik now serves the Lunar Wolves, a mercenary group on The Continent, his mind set on revenge for what had happened on that fateful day but also looking towards his future and his own personal desires now that he's been given a chance to push through the ranks.

    He and his closest allies are destined for many things with some being great goods and others being great evils afflicted onto the world. All for the chance of revenge and glory.

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-world-asunder_20003701805341805

      If you're a fan of modern-age dark fantasies with lots of action and fleshed-out characters, check out my ongoing project "Flowergild." I plan to update every Tuesday and Friday.

      Blurb: Much of the world has adopted the use of Shroud Power Plants, facilities that extract energy from a race of people known as shrouds, who are able to transform into demonic forms resembling various beasts. A young shroud man, named Aster, works as a shroud hunter, killing people of his own kind so that he can one day become human. The only way that Aster can achieve his goal is to follow the Arbiters' orders, but will his efforts lead him to salvation or suffering?

      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/flowergild_20194528806009805

        leave your opinions about my first novel guys, I really appreciate any kind of feedback, thanks for your attention ~

        Synopsis:
        The future unfolded unimaginably thanks to the unstoppable advance of technology. A true utopia was created, space travel became commonplace, diseases and deficiencies are problems of the past due to medicine's advancement.

        However, even in modern society, greed and arrogance remain fixed in human nature. Much of the advanced technologies and scientific benefits are available only to a privileged minority.

        However, due to an unusual event, the door to a new world has been opened. Human society will turn upside down when discovering the new dangers and opportunities that this new environment offers.

        Our protagonist will be at the epicenter of all this change. Will he be able to survive this sudden change and make his way to the top?

        Link: https://m.webnovel.com/book/collided-worlds_19692757106099505

          Novel name: Fate Breaker

          Author: Atai Muratbekov

          Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/fate-breaker_20196667705867105

          An ordinary guy named Baatyr, who once dreamed of becoming a hero, finds himself in a cruel and dangerous world, in which people, who call themselves Heroes, hunt the so-called Invaders - people and creatures, who came from other worlds. Now Baatyr has a long way to go. He must survive in this world, find himself, his true love and true friends and understand what it means to be a real Hero, a Baatyr!

            The Sorcerer's King: ways of the witches

            Blurb
            Long before the contemporary times, in the olden days of Africa, every male child born at dusk were used for sacrifice to appeal the witches. Although this act met resistance from the villagers who begged and sought-after salvation from the oppressive tradition of child sacrifice, nonetheless, the practise continued for centuries upon centuries until one very day, when King Oranmiyan, who was unable to produce a male offspring, became fortunate to bear his very first and last Prince. Even though the prince was born at dusk, everything changed when he failed to offer his son's life as a sacrifice as the culture had demanded. The witches grew angry and chaos began.
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                Check out my Paranormal / Sci-fi novel and please leave a review, comment and recommendation.
                Title: The Legend Of The Grim Reaper
                Link:https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-legend-of-the-grim-reaper_20105637206708505/the-legend-of-the-grim-reaper_54173815516756446

                Synopsis:
                “Grim Reaper was once a man (a visible man), he loved women and got entangled with many. He had no respect for women that he treats anyhow he likes because he was very powerful. He lived in Nafitath then, but how he got bad is a mystery. But Denos a lady of great beauty, wife of Aries god of war, charmed Grim Reaper unknowingly with her beauty. Thus Grim Reaper wanted to have her. It wasn’t possible, and I told him, but he bragged about his powers. He drew a battle line with him and Aries, thus destroying some innocent souls in Nafitath. Nafitath is a home of good gods. Why they’ve kept silent on these happenings is what I really don’t understand. Grim swore to destroy Nafitath, and he bragged to own his own empire, populating it with more women than men. I guess he’s doing just that. Grim Reaper was only called Grim. Reaper was added to his name as a curse. He fought with Aries, joining forces with Phaethon, son of the sun god.
                Phaethon however lost a great number of his powers because he tried to drive the sun’s chariot and that almost set fire to the world. Grim saw that he needed Phaethon no more, he left him aside. Pride was Grim’s weakness, he was so full of his powers that he forgot that Aries was the god of war and would defeat him.
                Aries defeated Grim, he almost killed him because Grim slept with Denos, but he resolved to make Grim invisible and irritably covered with green clouds and cursed him to be Reaper – cursed to destroy and be destroyed.

                The cursed is out causing havoc and there needs to arise an end. Find out if redemption will be possible after all not everyone is strong enough to break a curse....

                https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-legend-of-the-grim-reaper_20105637206708505/the-legend-of-the-grim-reaper_54173997515991836

                  Heart On Heat

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                  Genre: Contemporary Romance (WPC Urban -Female Lead)

                  Synopsis

                  Leading towards a road with lies, on the border of truths, the broken will be fixed, and the fixed will be broken. . .

                  Single while everyone else has someone to love. On an average day, enduring the daily grind, licensed Photographer Zuri Myers takes the client's request to take pictures of the cheating girlfriend secretly.

                  Living the dream, Rievo Catona , Prince of Arbugua runs away from home , unable to handle future king duties, landed in blue-eyes city, California. Hoping to find his trusted senior that owns a ranch, in adopting him as his. In exchange, he will work for him. While holding a paper with an address on it, he accidentally pushes the woman in front of him.

                  Zuri Myers, vowing not to fail in taking shots, crossed the road with red light; instead of someone pulling her back, she got pushed by a man.

                  However, the unexpected encounter will welcome new beginnings and opportunities regarding their lives.

                  ENJOY READING!!

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                    Title: The Devil and the Huntsman

                    Genre: Action, Fantasy, Romance, Shounen

                    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil-and-the-huntsman_19322730906149105

                    A MEDIEVAL DARK FANTASY SERIES

                    A great darkness is in the earth and supernatural forces are gathering around to take action and take over the world. The people believe that God has abandoned them and the earth is separated from the heavens. The people of the earth search for a mighty warrior to rule over them. They search for someone to swear that they will rule the world and bring the darkness out of the earth. The creatures of the night plague the lands and desire to take rule of the people.

                    One man who takes the mantle to rule the world is none other than Julius of Romania. A man who sought nothing more than ambition and power to defeat his enemies and save his family. He makes a deal with the Demon Wolf and becomes victorious over many obstacles, battles, and onslaughts. One year passes by and his daughter, Lagertha of Stockholm, drinks the blood of the wolf and becomes the queen of the wolves. Her one and only purpose in life is to honor her people by killing her father and ridding him from the madness that overtook him.

                    Many other people come who are linked together by fate and destiny. They are all cursed with all sorts of powers and tragic pasts. They all swore to live by the sword and die by the sword for the sake of saving their people and driving the forces of darkness away from the world. They would all make many hard choices and many sacrifices along the way. On this journey, they will come face to face against a man whose ambition clouded his soul and made him desire to rule the world and bring a new age to the land.

                    They are called the three hunters: Delphine of Moria, the Cursed Knight; Ragnar of Midland, the Ranger; and Iris of Kattegat, the Huntress. They are all bound by the blood of the wolf, and they were all found by the magic of the Wolf Queen. Together, they will do what is necessary to fight back against the demons and end the tyrannical reign of Mephiles, the Demon Wolf.

                    The Devil and the Huntsman is a new medieval dark fantasy series.

                      How It Feels to Float

                      Biz knows how to float. She has her people, posse, her mum and the twins. She has Grace. And she has her dad, who tells her about the little kid she was, and who shouldn't be here but is. So Biz doesn't tell anyone anything. Not about her dark, runaway thoughts, not about kissing Grace or noticing Jasper, the new boy. And she doesn't tell anyone about her dad. Because her dad died when she was seven. And Biz knows how to float, right there on the surface-normal okay regular fine.
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                        Savior Online - New LitRPG From a Fantasy Author

                        https://www.webnovel.com/book/savior-online_20200309705926905/chapter-1-a-lonely-cottage-nestled-in-the-mountains_54225212316637519

                        Synopsis:

                        What does it mean to be alive?

                        Savior Online was the pinnacle of next-generation full-dive VRMMO entertainment. Or, it was, until a rogue employee and a hacker collective teamed up to trap all of its players in the game with no escape aside from defeating the final boss, plus the added threat that death in the game meant death in real life. After four years of grueling grinding, planning, and preparation, the best of the game’s high-level players - known as “The Vanguard” - assaulted the Demon King’s fortress at the edge of the world - and lost. Now, five years on, the game’s disparate survivors have forged new lives in the game with the understanding that the Demon King will never fall.

                        Lucas, one of the few surviving Vanguard members, idles his life away in solitude in his mountain hermitage. His dispassionate life is interrupted one day when a relic of his past returns with news of his old comrade’s passing - and possible proof of the system’s corruption. Now, the once-reckless warrior must confront his painful past and survive the system’s impatient AI that seems to be cleansing the world of the remaining players, all while coming to terms with his eternal entrapment within Savior Online.

                          vMMORPG: Broken Chains

                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/vmmorpg-broken-chains_19768690505185005

                          Synopsis:
                          James, a cripple since birth, is stuck laying in bed feeling as if he is chained down. He was born with a never before seen disease which made him unable to move his arms and legs. The doctors said it would be more humane to euthanize the boy rather than let him live a sad life.

                          His parents were unable to kill off their boy. They decided to keep their child but swore to give him the best life they can.

                          His parents and older sister lived up to their promise. He enjoyed his days to his fullest. His parents and sister would go on trips and tell him stories of what they experienced. They tried to take him with they once but he said he felt miserable being unable to be directly included in the fun. He found the he preferred being told stories that let his imagination run wild.

                          His father spared no expense in searching for a cure or a way for his son to be able to move again. During his search for ways to save his son he created a medial technology firm. The technology he created for his son all ended up as products to sell at his firm. He needed money to continue the search. What the world did not know is that James’s father only saw all of technology they deemed divine gifts as failures. He was unable to find anything to save his son from his fate.

                          That was until now. He firmly believes he found a way to cure his son! He set out to retrieve the last piece of the puzzle.

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