Hello. I'm new to writing on Webnovel and have just sent out my first chapter. I've had Writer's Block for years now, and am trying to work through it, so I don't know if my writing is any good right now. I would be honored if someone were to review it for me and give me criticism where it's due. Pointers and/or advice will be helpful as well. I would also be happy to review others too, though I don't know if I'll be much help.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/hemmingston_20349946205459605

Thank you for giving me your time.

    Nakasuka I gave you my review, mate! It was a fun read! Despite being new here in webnovel, your writing style is amazing!

        kuhaku_sora Thank you so much! I will be sure to heed your advice about the adverbs. I'm currently reading your book, and so far, I like the concept and backstory of the game that you depicted. I'll be sure to review it afterwards!

            Nakasuka Thank you! You should definitely join in the contest here in webnovel. You could easily snatch the gold prize in no time! I've seen a lot here in this platform with their bland stories and such, but yours is amazing! You should try joining one if you feel like it! I am really rooting for you, mate~

                DaoistTaItLu Heyy Thanksss!!☺️ I just checked now, I got the notification but it's not displayed under my book. Could you maybe check?

                    _Rain I don't know, same thing happened to me with some of the reviews, I have raised the complaint with webnovel, lets see.

                        kuhaku_sora Aww, thank you! Though I don't think that I'm THAT good, at least not yet. I appreciate the thought though! I've just got done reviewing your story, and may I say that I'm just in awe!! It's absolutely amazing!! I'm not fully finished reading it yet, but at least I now have a new book to read! I feel like this can/will become a manga sooner or later, and I'm not just saying that. The prologue is kind of awkward and you have some grammar mistakes here or there, but everything else is just absolutely amazing! Keep up the great work, I'll be rooting for you!

                            Review swap anyone?

                            Here's my story... SYNOPSIS : The world you know doesn't exist anymore...
                            Relics, items created by the collection of human memories from ancient history and folktales descended on the world and wreaked havoc, causing an apocalypse level event that threatened the extinction of humanity.
                            In the year 785 AR (After Relics)
                            A young boy ventures out on an adventure to put together a group of talented individuals to journey across the globe to uncover the truth behind the great apocalypse 800 years ago...

                            LINK: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/20371312505666305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4307013097

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