Meg_Goodhope

Delete my comments.
If you don't know how to do it in the 3rd POV I offered a re-write (also in past simple tense) a piece of your text to show you that it will look much better. You just have to give me a piece of text that I can edit. (so it won't take me so much time...)

If you want you can leave a review. (I have two stories on WN)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-bet_20161539905271805

    I'd love to review swap, I just recently started to post my short stories again after removing them. They are based on nightmares I've had, the best genre description for them is "surreal horror"

    My book link is https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-nightmare-chronicles_14168046805540505

    If you review my novel I will more than gladly review yours in turn!

      TofSpades Thanks for the review. Yet, I would please request that you make it more realistic. Did you read a chapter or two maybe? That would be better in helping you write an honest review and that is what I do for people whom I review their work. It will be better, Thabks again very much for your review though but please write a more honest one ๐Ÿ™

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