Meg_Goodhope

Delete my comments.
If you don't know how to do it in the 3rd POV I offered a re-write (also in past simple tense) a piece of your text to show you that it will look much better. You just have to give me a piece of text that I can edit. (so it won't take me so much time...)

If you want you can leave a review. (I have two stories on WN)
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-bet_20161539905271805

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