Jo_J Henlo are you interested in review swaping with mine? It is a Fantasy female lead. My first time writing too. I would be glad if you leave me some feedback to improve :)
Here is mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/new-life-new-task-i'll-be-a-mom-then!!!_20181084106791705

I'll be using main account "RandomPotato" in reviewing :) For some reasons it cannot enter this forum coz the name is taken so i had to use my old account.

      Name: Ride Or Die With Me
      Synopsis: The peaceful city of Seoul with peaceful people having a good day.
      But the monsters under our beds don't ever sleep.
      But what to do when they walk freely?
      Then everyone has to hide or fight to save themselves.
      Kim Taehyun.
      He's untouchable. The whole of Asia is under his feet.
      Everything is his when he lays his eyes on them.
      But what will happen when he lays his eyes on her smile?
      Park Naeun.
      A secret agent. A deadly threat.
      A day dream dressed as a nightmare.
      "Agent 007 we have a new mission for you."
      "What is it this time?"
      "You have to catch the biggest mafia in all of Asia.
      Gain his trust.
      Join his gang.
      And Destroy him."
      "That's all?
      Piece of cake."
      Everything goes according to plan.
      But falling in love...
      Wasn't planned.
      And just like a promise,
      They were meant to be broken.

      Anyone up for a review swap?
      https://www.webnovel.com/book/ride-or-die-with-me_20492542306002705

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