kuhaku_sora Ok done with yours! I've left some suggestions in the paragraph comment to help you with some stuff. I hope that it'll be of help.
By the way, I remember reviewing your story about an NPC "Code Red riding hood" I think. I do remember that back then you had more grammar issues.
I was surprised to see that in your new story there are fewer than before. You've made good progress man. Kudos!
By the way, do you have discord?
Adwaid_Nambiar Hello! Let's swap reviews, please? Thank you! Here's mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/scarlette-overland_19923920306012005
Lindsy_newton Okay, I will review swap with you!
Time to Shine
https://m.webnovel.com/book/my-time-to-shine_19764557306319805
KazuSeijuro2 Hello! Let's swap reviews, please? Thank you! Here's mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/scarlette-overland_19923920306012005
Uselessepiknovel Just finished yours! Hope you review back.
Yoan_Roturier Thanks man for the review and the suggestions! And yes, I have a discord. We can add each other Kuhaku_sora#9634
Uselessepiknovel
Hey, I have added your story to my library and will read and review it by end of today.
Please check out my story as well when you get time.
link- https://www.webnovel.com/book/lovingly-together_20218358406350305
Thank you!
Hello!
If you'd like an honest review exchange with me then please reply to this message with your story links.
This is mine- https://www.webnovel.com/book/lovingly-together_20218358406350305
(Please add my story to your lib if it attracts you in the slightest bit and I'll add yours to mine.)
Hope we can both benefit from this exchange.
Thank you!
Thatguyray I left a review, mate!
star_dreamer Hello! Let's swap reviews, please? Thank you! Here's mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/scarlette-overland_19923920306012005
Review swap?
Here's my link ~
https://m.webnovel.com/book/ghost-busters_20322367305200405
Lonewo1f Im in. Here is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/ironfrost_20604689905898205
Lonewo1f sure, I'll add the book to my library, here's my link https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-isle-of-guardians_20261717406779805
star_dreamer Im in. Here is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/ironfrost_20604689905898205
VRW1 im in. Here is my link
https://www.webnovel.com/book/ironfrost_20604689905898205
empressblackrose09 hey, I you wanna swap, here's my link https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-isle-of-guardians_20261717406779805
Victoria_Mwiti Sure! I'm gonna check out yours.
Lonewo1f Up for swap.
Here's my link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-legendary-daddy-merchant_20532764705199005
I'm going to read it later so I'll add yours to my library first.
Victoria_Mwiti I added yours to my library. I read the synopsis and I won't lie. I was intrigued. Gonna read it tonight.
