_Meggie_ I'm done reviewing, I really love your book and your writing skills are good too.. Keep updating 🙂

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      Hello,
      Anyone Wanna review swap?

      Title: SHADOWS ALPHA 2089
      Genre: Fantasy (Male-Lead)
      Tag: romance action-adventure superpowers fantasy cultivation r18 sci-fi
      LINK: SHADOW ALPHA 2089

      synopsis: A story about a 16 years old boy, named Dante, who one day, mysterious flying shadow figures attacked his hometown, and killed everyone dear to him. Now he's on a journey, to find the killers, get stronger, and have his revenge, no matter the cost. In a world where people can use ki to gain superpowers.
      The event of the story takes place in a Cyberpunk/Fantasy world set in 2089

        Gaureeey I finished reading it and it was great. You depicted the MC's internal thoughts beautifully and how you wrote about T was also very good. I can sense his struggle in the robotic way he is. One thing I would comment would be how you wrote the dialogue. When it was still the same person speaking, I got a little confused when you separate the dialogue. I thought it was another character speaking until I read the overall context of the dialogue before figuring out it was actually still the same person. The story is awesome and intriguing.

        P.S. Sorry if I'm wrong for replying here, this is my first time swap reviewing. Awaiting for your review 😁
        edit: I post the review in your webnovel page 👍

            ohremi19 DONE THRU! its okayyyy i understand, i'll go back and smoothen that part out, glad at least someone's got good eyes here lol THANK YOU AGAIN

                SirJK_26REVIEWED! sorry i took A LOT OF TIME, but I'm glad i did because it wouldn't be fun reading a book like yours without vividly imagining the plot, hope you get where I'm coming from <3 MAN I FEEL BAD NOW,I'm so sorry once again!

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